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So I'm going to write my first story. TL;DR couple goes to buffet, the buffet has a rule, any wasted food and the patrons will work there for a month finishing all the leftover food from the entire buffet. Girl gorges on food but wastes her last plate, then gets taken to start, story takes place over the one month. weight gain 120 => just under 300. any tips and things you guys may want that would make the story a lot more enjoyable, also any big no nos for writing this kind of thing ( i know the big ones ie;no describing bellies using numbers) any help would be appreciated will be posting here when finished. eta a few weeks pics unrelated, for your trouble edit: just realized that i just spoiled my whole story but whatever, I'll delete this after i get the help i need. edit 2: Gotten the help i need, can one of the mods pls delete this? the story will posted in a couple weeks

I made a post before this, i don't know when i'll finish the story but im currently finishing up the second part. feel free to give all kinds of feedback and whatever else crosses your mind. its also on deviant art, but the link to paste in here is acting weird, if you can help me with that, it would be much appreciated ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Chapter One : The DinnerOakland, CA. --“I’ve been waiting forever to try this place.” eagerly said Christina. “Dragon Pearl, what a cool name.” She looked around at the ceiling and noticed all of the crazy design all over the entrance hall. The couple had been together for quite some time now, almost six months. Christina was one of those unassuming girls that never saw the bad in anyone. Japanese and fine featured, dark black hair that fell past her back, she had a round face, and such chubby cheeks, the kind that people love to pinch and squeeze. Standing at 5-foot-3 she had just an average body, weighing no more than 115 pounds slightest bubble butt that was indicative of years of semi-athleticism. And a waist that was slim but showed the slightest hint that she loved eating. Mark on the other hand was just an average guy, he had approached Christina randomly at University, and then the rest was history. They had a simple relationship, not a lot of stress, easygoing but occasionally difficult, just like any other.She came dressed in a simple pair of black leggings and a tucked in, heather grey body suit underneath a grey button up blouse. It accentuated every curve on her body, her body wasn’t the most curvy, but her average waist and small breasts made it look more natural. As the couple were showed to their table, you could see the way she walked, had the slightest hip in her step, showing off her small yet perky bubble butt. They get settled into their table and the waitress explains something. Christina is too busy preparing herself for the buffet, but she notices something about the waitress as she’s explaining something to her.“The buffet has a seating limit time of two hours, after that, you must leave to allow for the table to be given to another guest. Any wasted food will b-” cut off mid sentence by Christina.“Thanks so much, but I’m starved, I should get started if I only have two hours” said Christina.“Okay that’s fine, I’ll come back later to get your drink orders.” the waitress replied as she walked away. Christina noticed something odd, the waitress was extremely large, but her uniform looked like a perfect fit though, no shortage of material anywhere. She brushed it off and began her march to the main floor.Enter the main floor, she had never seen anything like it, the brightest colours of food and the most extravagant displays. It looked like a Las Vegas buffet at the Wynn, the kind of thing that you only ever dreamed about, well she did anyway, a Chinese buffet only in name sake. A huge hall of food cooked right in front of you, every kind of cuisine you could imagine, nothing looked like it was sitting out for more than 10 minutes. Christina was going to have a fun night.She started at the grill where they were preparing portions of steak, burgers, hot dogs and anything else you could grill on a barbecue. She eagerly looked for plates and found one the size of a hub cap. First were the burgers, she eagerly piled a few on her plate, then moved onto the steaks, single meal sized portions almost 10 ounces each. She grabbed a few vegetable to pile on as well, she wasn’t one of those girls that only enjoyed eating the most unhealthy foods out there, she just enjoyed eating food period. She paused for a moment, then peered down the rest of the line, there were so many more stations that she wanted to visit. Noticing that her plate was getting sort of heavy, she looked at it and didn’t even realize that it was full, she would have to wait to try the other stations during her second round.Slowly walking back to the table, she couldn’t wait to begin eating all of the decadent foods she grabbed, Mark came back as well, but with a more sensible portion.“Famished aren’t you?” Mark quipped.“Shut up, you know I’ve always wanted to come here.” replied Christina.“Yeah yeah, just don’t go overboard.”“Psh, it’s called all-you-can-eat for a reason dumbass.”She finally began to eat her mountain of food, starting with the steak, she grabbed her fork and knife and began cutting it into smaller chunks. She carefully picked each one up while getting all of the juices in it, and brought it up to her mouth. The sensation was amazing, it was unlike anything she had ever eaten, almost orgasmic in taste. Shoving more into her mouth, there was no more concept of enjoying the meal and taking her time, eating as much as she could became the end goal. Quickly making work of the steaks, the steaks were beginning to make work of her waistline. The shirt that ever so perfectly hugged her body was beginning to show the slightest hints of a bloating belly underneath. That average waist of hers was slowly expanding with every bite, as the steak quickly went from plate to mouth to stomach. Next were the burgers, something Christina had been looking for to. She bit into the patties, producing a similar feeling to the steaks, but all the bread in the bun was having a different effect on her waist. Her stomach never liked the excessive bread, and it was really beginning to show. The buttons on her blouse were ever so slightly being pressed against more prominently than before. Each burger she finished caused her stomach to jut out a little more. After finishing the last burger, her gut was completely stuffed, the blouse was not hiding her stomach at all anymore. Christina felt a tightness in her waist, and readjusted her leggings and sat back for a moment to catch her breath. She had felt a feeling like this before, but not to this extent, her stomach was stuffed to brim at this point, but she wouldn’t let that stop her, she still had vegetables to finish. Each of the heads of broccoli went down with ease, but she had piled so much onto her plate, that there was no way her growing belly could handle very much more. Overwhelmed with the bloating and churning of her stomach, she went to the bathroom to make sure everything was alright. Looking in the mirror was a side to behold, her gut looked like an overstuffed bag of jelly. Taut and hard, she poked herself and gave her stomach a light rub, her belly piercing looked like it was holding back a dam of food, with her gut about to burst. She rubbed her gut firmly hoping to help her belly digest the absurd amounts of food inside, but realized that she was paying good money for this buffet and she was determined to get her money’s worth. It was slightly more difficult to walk, all of the extra weight was centered right in her belly, she felt so heavy and held her belly lightly to avoid any further discomfort. “Overdid it didn’t you?” said Mark“Shut up, I’m just bloated, too much bread in the burger buns.” replied Christina as she rubbed her swollen belly“Good thing you’re wearing leggings.”“I wanted to come here, and I plan on getting my money’s worth.” Letting out a soft burp, releasing some of the gas in her stomach, and instantly made her feel better. Her stomach noticeably depressing as she let out her gas. The blouse was no longer stretched past the buttons, but her stomach now felt more solid and stuffed as opposed to feeling like an overinflated balloon. Christina was ready for more, giving her belly a soft rub.She brings her empty plate back up to the line for more, now walking straight past the grill to the deep frying area, this is where she would redeem herself. Deep fried food was not her thing, whenever she had too much, her bloating would be worse than any amount of bread could ever make it, but she couldn’t care less. Piling on; fried chicken, french fries, and a massive deep fried calzone, she was ready for round two. There was no slowly enjoying anything anymore, Christina gorged herself on everything she could pile onto her plate. The fried chicken was eaten down to the bone, her mouth constantly full of food without a break, she couldn’t let her stomach get in the way of her pride. The way she stuffed piece after piece into her mouth, her bulging belly grew with every swallow. Midway into finishing her fourth piece of fried chicken, she felt an unbearable tightness in her stomach, her blouse was finally reaching it’s limits. Forced to unbutton it, her stomach immediately ballooned out of her blouse, and fell around the sides of her ever-expanding gut, with the bodysuit stretched around the front of her belly like a balloon. The amount of satisfaction that came from undoing her button forced her to pause for a second, to admire her new size. Her stomach now completely engorged with food, her leggings barely able to contain her massive gut, and her underlying bodysuit stretched to it’s limits. She couldn’t explain why she had stopped, but then realized as she felt a slight wetness in her leggings. The absurd amounts of food inside of her stomach put into a feeling of bliss that she had never felt before. Instantly blushing uncontrollably, she can’t contain her feelings, her crotch is still getting stimulation from her heavy gut. Every bite she takes, makes it grow larger, heavier, and weigh down against her crotch more and more, causing her more pleasure the more she gorges herself on food. Christina can’t help but softly run her fingers through her fingers through her vagina as she experiences the feeling of being completely stuffed and engorged with food. Her breathing gets heavier, and her stomach heaves against her crotch as she uncontrollably rubs her stomach. It’s too much for her to handle, she instantly climaxes from the pure pressure of her massive belly weighing down against her crotch. She can’t bring herself to have another bite because she’s too engulfed by the feeling of satisfaction and gluttony. Resting for a minute as she just climaxed in the middle of the buffet, she notices that Mark has gone to the bathroom, but they are the last guests in the buffer. Her leggings are completely soaked, still breathing heavily, she has no ability to finish her food, but the feeling of pride that overcame her is enough to give her satisfaction. There is still the giant calzone and the french fries sitting on her plate, but she can’t be bothered to finish it now. As she is preparing to leave, she sees the waitress from earlier coming up to her table with a drink. “Here you go miss.”“Thank you” Christina was parched, she didn’t think twice about taking the drink. “That was so amazing, what is it?”“Our manager is coming over right now to speak with you” Enter the manager, a massive woman that walks over sternly and gives Christina a slight look of disapproval. “Miss…”“Sugiura” replied Christina assuredly“Miss Sugiura, the buffet is closing, you have reached your two hour time limit, so I'm going to assuming you’re finished. Did the waitress explain to you what happens when you waste your plates?”“Don’t I just get pay for it?”“In a way, yes. Do you even know what you just drank?”“No” a sense of fear loomed over Christina.“I’m fairly certain the waitress explained what would happen if you wasted your food, but judging by your current state”, she peered at her stomach, and she embarrassingly tried to cover it up to no avail. “You obviously didn’t listen. Girls like you never do, and that’s why you’ll pay, your attitude is what got you here, and it’s what’s gonna force you to stay”“Miss, she flat out interrupted me mid sentence to go begin her feast.” explained the waitress“I had no ide-” cut off mid sentence. She suddenly felt an intense rumbling in her stomach.“That’s no surprise at all. Our policy here is that any wasted food will be payed for, in one way or another.” The manager waddled back off to her officeThe intense rumbling was almost unbearable, Christina couldn’t handle it, she felt like she hadn’t eaten in a year. The calzone was calling to her, as if her stomach had completely subsided. She grabbed it with both hands and devoured it at the same pace she had when she first started gorging herself. The sauce, cheese, toppings inside, all had the same effect on her that her first steak did, it felt sensational. It was gone in a matter of minutes, but then that awful feeling came back to her. Christina grasped her stomach and forgot that she had eaten herself to orgasm, her stomach more massive than before. The added weight of the calzone brought her to a new level, her bodysuit hits it’s limit, she pulled it out from her leggings, exposing her deep navel. Now that the tightness was gone, she was free to massage her belly into a more comfortable state, her leggings stretched to their max, her stomach dominating her whole lap, she felt like she was having triplets. She kept rubbing as the waitress dropped a uniform on the table.“This is the only thing that’s going to fit you.” Christina paid little attention to her, she continually rubbed her bloated belly trying to ease the pain of the calzone expanding in her stomach, all the bread didn’t work out so well the first time. “What was it about that drink that let her completely inhale an entire calzone”, she thought to herself. Christina was settled down when the waitress continued.“You’re gonna be working here for the next month, we promised never to waste any food, we can’t force you to eat off of other people's plates, but you can finish the restaurant's supply of food every night so we uphold that promise. I was once in your position, but I learned my lesson.” She patted her belly firmly “Now it’s your turn. That drink lets your body digest food much more efficiently, your metabolism is increased, and your body can take every bit of nutrients from any food you eat. In essence, you’ll be bigger than me at the rate that you eat, this drink helps you get there. You’re already looking a bit chubbier than when you first walked in.” Christina felt the waitress lightly pat her swollen belly, and she felt it jiggle. She loved eating, but didn’t know how to feel about becoming the size of a sumo wrestler. She couldn’t think straight, the food coma was setting in, the waitress showed her to the living area and brought her uniform with her. The living area was just as extravagant as the buffet, she was beginning not to mind it at all. Christina managed to make her way to the bed before crashing, as she laid in bed for a few minutes, she felt her belly spreading across her body, weighing her down from the middle of her torso. She began to rub it sensually, and felt the slight layer of belly fat beginning to form over her swollen gut. As she was falling asleep, only one thought crossed her mind “At least she was getting her money’s worth.”

Silly me for having a buffet three times this week hehe