Ah. Is that so? Then why not, I don’t know, offer some actual constructive criticism instead of being an ass and saying it’s dumb without any context or reasoning as to why? You could have said “the plot is a bit derivative of other works. The whole guy doesn’t realize his ex gained 200 pound's thing has been done before in similar fashion,” or “the fact he didn’t notice how fat she was is odd. How could he not tell, if she was behind a tall counter or if they had been talking on Skype or something then ok but how could he not tell especially because shouldn’t she look wider since she’s sitting down?”. Those were actual constructive criticisms I had when I read it. I’ve always hated when people read stories and shoot negativity without reason behind it, regardless of the quality of the work.