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4 hours ago, Jordi said:

Ojalá regreses pronto con más capítulos ♥️ excelente historia

Thank you for those kind words. The story will continue soon but I’ve just been lacking the inspiration to continue it for now. I actually wrote the next chapter but then lost it which has made it feel much more tedious to have to write what you’ve already written. I’ll try to update before the end of the week.

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As Katie walked into the Kitchen, the first thing that struck her was how much food there was. Despite having experienced first hand how glutinous some of her friends and family had become, it appeared that not even they had managed to polish off all of the food which had been brought. Everywhere Katie looked there was something which looked equally delicious and unhealthy. Boxes of home made brownies lined the shelves, multiple tubs of ice cream sat on the counter (they had probably melted hours ago) and on the small table in the corner, there was an entire chocolate cake. Katie shivered at the thought of how many calories were sitting in this room and briefly thought about hiding them before her mom came in and got any ideas. However, her thought process was disrupted by the sound of heavy panting coming from Amanda as she waddled through the door. 
 

After pausing for a few seconds to get her breath back from the short walk from one room to another and tugging her shirt down over her belly to attempt to cover it only for the shirt to spring right back to its initial position, exposing a couple of inches of her stomach, Amanda said in her usual kind voice “what did you want to speak to me about sweetie?” 
Katie beckoned Amanda over to a table in the centre of the room and took a seat. However, as soon as she did this, she immediately regretted choosing the Kitchen as a place to discuss things. As soon as she had sat down, Amanda had reached her chubby hands into the middle of the table and plucked a chocolate brownie (this was her favourite dessert if you couldn’t guess already) from the top of a pile of them on a plate and placed it in her mouth. Katie sighed inwardly although at this point was hardly surprised and decided to start her questioning.

”What happened mom?” Katie blurted out. She wasn’t sure how to approach the elephant in the room, so just decided to be blunt about it. Katie had to wait a few seconds to get a response while Amanda finished swallowing the fattening treat, but once her mom had finished swallowing, she replied. 
“What do you mean?” Amanda said innocently. Once again, Katie sighed on the inside. She had hoped her mom would have got the hint so she wouldn’t have to say it herself. 
“Well…errr…how did everyone get so…you know?” Katie stuttered puffing her cheeks out and making her arms spread out imitating someone much fatter than herself. She knew it was a stupid way to approach the subject, but was couldn’t bring herself to openly call her mother fat to her face. 
“Ahh” said Amanda seeming to understand what Katie was on about. 
“Well I suppose it’s partly to do with the new restaurant in town. The food there is to die for!” Exclaimed Amanda with a slight smile on her face. “Unfortunately, it isn’t exactly great for the waistline. I’ve never checked, but the food must be insanely high in calories!” 
 

Katie was taken aback by this. She had a few theories as to why a few people she was close with had been expanding so quickly, but a new restaurant was not one of them. 
“What’s it called?” Asked Katie. She wasn’t sure if she wanted to go into this place or not. 
“errrrm…it’s some Italian name. I have no idea what it means I think it’s called ‘Ingrassare’.” Said Amanda.

Once again, Katie sighed inwardly. No matter how hard she tried, she couldn’t be mad at her mother. Amanda was just too nice. Katie could feel her anger begin to cool. Maybe she was wrong to blame her mom for her sister’s huge weight gain. Whilst she certainly didn’t help by making this absurd amount of food, Becky didn’t have to eat it.  Katie suddenly felt a lot happier. Her mother was able to do this to her, even without necessarily trying.

”Okay mom, but can you try to help Becky cut back a bit? She’s getting really heavy.” 
“I’ll try my best sweetie, but I’m not gonna force her to be unhappy”, Amanda replied. Katie felt at ease once again, and switched off a bit. Almost subconsciously, she reached for one of the brownies. 
 

For the next hour, Katie and Amanda talked to each other whilst making their way through the brownies. Whilst Amanda was certainly eating most of them, Katie was still eating much more than she would have liked. She kept on promising each one would be her last, but every time she finished one, her hand would automatically reach for another. Over the hour, Katie ate 8 of the high calorie brownies. It was only halfway through her ninth that she snapped back to reality. One glance down at her swollen belly was enough for Katie to start panicking. How many had she eaten? She hadn’t kept track, but it was definitely too many. Looking at her watch, Katie decided to call it a night as it was well past midnight. As Katie was saying her final goodbyes to Amanda, out of curiosity, she asked “how much do you weight by the way?” Katie wasn’t going to ask her, but she figured she might need those numbers if Becky was over 350 by Easter. 

“403 as of last week.” Said Amanda nonchalantly. “Personally I don’t care, but the doctor wasn’t too pleased with me!” Laughed Amanda. Katie didn’t understand how her mom could be so care free about her weight, but didn’t say anything. Instead, she silently thanked herself for wearing such stretchy pants, got into her Renault Clio and drove home.

 

Sorry for not updating in SO long. To make up for this huge gap in updates I extended this chapter. As I said earlier, I had already written most of this chapter but then lost it, so it felt a lot more like a chore to rewrite. If anybody has any ideas of what they want me to do next in this story, please tell me. Otherwise, thank you for reading all of this!
 

 



 
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*BEEP BEEP BEEP*

Katie rolled over, reaching for the alarm clock by her bed. It took a few attempts, but eventually she managed to shut it off. Letting out a big yawn, she rolled out of bad and began her morning routine. As usual, Greg had already left the house to begin his 2 hour commute to work. Luckily for Katie, she was only a 20 minute walk away from her office in the centre of the city. 

As Katie was getting out of the shower, fully naked, she glanced at herself in the mirror. The was a common occurrence during her routine, but this time she was a bit taken aback by what she saw. 
 

Whilst most of her body looked the same as always, her face was still flawlessly beautiful, her arse was still fairly trim, although maybe a bit more padded than she would have liked, and her legs were still sleek and smooth. The only problem was her stomach. Whilst normally flat and toned (well, most of the time), her stomach was definitely still swollen from last nights party. 
“I knew I overdid it last night” Katie muttered to herself as she dragged her gaze off of her slightly puffier reflection and began to continue with her routine. “Oh well. It’s just a bit of bloating, I’ll just go easy on the breakfast today.” She thought to herself.

When the time came to picking something suitable for work, Katie instinctively grabbed some stylish, but still smart, trousers for work. She loved how they made her butt look. However, after thinking about last night’s jean fiasco, Katie put them back in favour of a grey pencil skirt with an elastic waist as well as a slightly loose button up shirt. Or at least what she thought would be a loose shirt. As it turned out, the shirt fit almost perfectly around her figure. 
 

Looking at herself in the mirror, Katie was fairly happy with what she saw. Even if the skirt pinched a bit more than she would have liked, she was still a knockout. “It’s only a couple of pounds,” Katie reasoned to herself. “It’s not like 133 is fat or anything”.

 

Sorry for not updating in over 2 months. I was severely lacking inspiration. I’ve been reading other writer’s work and it has really shown me how much worse at storytelling than SO many others in this community. Still, if anybody has taken the time to read this story, I would love any feedback on how to improve. Thanks for reading.

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12 hours ago, Thicktiger said:

I liked Katie’s discovery of her belly, just let her forget or ignore it and development gain slowly but constantly 😊

That’s a really good idea! I’ll try and incorporate it into the story. Also, from a writing perspective do you have any suggestions? I’m thinking about leaving more spaces in between paragraphs or adding more descriptions. This is my first story and I’m not convinced I’ve written it very well.

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“I’ll just have a light breakfast”, Katie thought to herself as she entered the kitchen. She was running slightly late for work and didn’t want to have to take the car into work. She had missed one of her 2 weekly workout sessions last night to go to the party and wanted the extra exercise a 20 minute walk would bring her. Looking back at the past couple of weeks, Katie could not remember the last time she actually got 2 workouts in one week. Ever since the news of her pregnancy had been delivered, there was always something clashing with her exercise. This coupled with her hectic schedule not allowing her enough time to properly manage what went into her mouth had lead to the extra couple of pounds which had found their way onto Katie’s body, mainly her arse. 
 
Making a mental note to start cutting out some of the unneeded calories entering her body, Katie opened the fridge to see what was in there. The answer made her freeze.

 

The fridge was practically overflowing from the amount of food packed into it. Each type of food had been put into smaller boxes, each one probably stuffed with at least 10,000 calories worth of unhealthy food. Stuck onto a box of brownies, was a note:

Amanda still had a load of food left after the party so I volunteered to take it.

Greg x


Katie sighed in frustration. How was she meant to keep her weight under control when the house was full of delicious and tempting treats? A quick glance at her watch only increased her frustration. It was already 8:50 and she was supposed to be there by 9:00! 
 

“Ugh! I’ll worry about dieting later!” Muttered a very frustrated Katie. Grabbing the whole box of Brownies from the fridge, she shoved one down her throat as fast as she could and headed towards her car. It was too late to walk and she couldn’t run whilst carrying food.

5 minutes and another calorie loaded brownie later, Katie arrived at her office. The building, like most situated in the area stretched high into the sky. Due to her fairly senior position, Katie’s personal floor was towards the top of the building. Whilst there was an elevator which covered all the floors, Katie always took the stairs as a form of exercise. However, just as she was about to begin her journey upwards, she heard her name being called from behind her. 
 

Katie turned around to see her colleague Amber walking towards her. Amber was what most people would call ‘chubby’. With mid length blond hair, bright blue eyes and a pretty face, Amber was undeniably beautiful. However, over the past few years her good looks had been buried under a soft layer of fat. Her once defined jawline had become soft and a second chin was starting to make itself known. She had large D cup breasts which were slightly overflowing the confines of their container. Moving down, her gut poked forward to around level with her large breasts and seemed to lack any muscle definition (most likely due to her hatred of the gym). Katie noticed that Amber’s thighs were beginning to rub together whilst she walked, a clear sign of her thigh gap being no longer present. Finally, her butt stuck out behind her but seemed to be losing its battle with gravity and was beginning to lose its shape. Over the past couple of years, Katie had watched as Amber quickly went from curvy to thick to pudgy to chubby and she was well on her way to crossing the threshold to plump territory. For Amber’s relatively short stature of 5’5, Katie guessed that she was probably hovering at about 180 pounds, but judging by the large takeaway bag in her hand, she wouldn’t be for long.

“Hey Amber!” Katie replied, pleased to see a friend she could talk to on her journey up to her floor. Amber also worked on Katie’s floor, albeit in a more junior role. The 2 had become friends due to their similar age and interests.

“Hi” Amber responded panting slightly from her walk across the car park, fitness had never been her strong suit. However, her round face immediately brightened when she saw the brownies in Katie’s hand. 

“Oh, you’ve bought brownies! Can I have one?” Without waiting for an answer, Amber snatched a particularly big brownie from the box and took a bite. As she was eating the unhealthy treat, Katie couldn’t help but notice how tight Amber’s red shirt was around her quivering belly. Amber was never one for following the rules and this was portrayed by her choice of clothing. A red T-shirt and jeans were hardly appropriate for the workplace, but since nobody ever called her out for it, Amber didn’t care.   


However, Katie couldn’t help but notice how Ill fitting Amber’s clothes seemed to have become. She had seen her wear these particular clothes on a number of occasions but never before had they appeared so tight. Her red top clung to her belly in an extremely unflattering way, the imprint of her belly button clearly visible. Her soft arms seemed to be straining the sleeves of the shirt to their absolute limit. Moving down, Amber’s jeans weren’t faring much better. They looked painted onto her chunky thighs and the button was clearly struggling. Katie was amazed Amber had managed to squeeze herself into clothes which were obviously designed for someone a few sizes smaller. Katie suspected that this may be the final time she’d see Amber in these clothes.

Once she’d demolished the Brownie in just a few seconds, Amber started to set off towards the elevator. At this moment, Katie made the decision to skip the stairs this day and accompanied Amber up to their floor. Skipping the stairs once wasn’t exactly gonna make her fat…

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The rest of the day past uneventfully. As did the day after that and the day after that. Every day her alarm woke her up at 6:00. Every day she would wriggle into her ever tightening work clothes and grab a box of them to share with her co workers. Every day she promised herself she would eat better yet every day she wound up consuming 3000 plus calories. 
 

Every. Single. Day.

The only change to her mundane schedule was her occasional gym sessions. What had started as 2 per week had gradually shrunk down to 1 over the past couple of weeks. The combination of not wanting to put too much strain on her pregnant body combined with her love of socialising lead to her rigorous exercise regime being put on the back burner in favour of a more leisurely one.

Unfortunately for Katie, this change in lifestyle did not go unnoticed by her body…

 

1 month later…

 

 

*BEEP BEEP BEEP*

 

Katie rolled over, reaching for her alarm clock and managing to get it on the first attempt. She lay there for a few moments, trying to find the energy to lug herself out of bed. Eventually, she succeeded and after a brief shower, moved into the spacious bedroom to find some clothes to wear. However, a brief glance at her reflection in the mirror quickly brought a look of shock to her face. Whilst still thin by almost every metric, the person staring back at her no longer seemed so flawless. Her stomach which had once been toned and flat now protruded a couple of inches passed her hips. Poking her finger into her now visible belly, Katie was surprised by how far it sunk in but gave it little thought. “Oh well, belly’s always expand during pregnancy…”
 

However, before she could survey the rest of the damage, an alarm coming from her phone snapped her gaze away from the mirror and towards the device. 
 

Doctors 7:00 

She was going to be late…

 

This sent Katie into a blind panic. She had completely forgotten about the doctor appointment she’d booked to have before work. Due to the pregnancy, Katie was due for a visit every month. 

Immediately, thoughts of her growing belly were abandoned as she rushed over to the wardrobe to grab something to wear. Had she taken longer to look herself over, Katie would have discovered that her belly wasn’t the only thing to have grown. Whilst her belly had naturally grown the most due to pregnancy, Katie’s thighs had clearly expanded. Although they didn’t touch, there wasn’t quite as much daylight between them than previously. Her face had remained largely unaffected with the only change being a slight softening in the jawline. Her breasts hadn’t grown much, but a noticeable snugness had crept into Katie’s bras. However, the largest change was in her butt. Although still not much, Katie’s arse clearly took up more space than it used to. Whilst still shapely, a softness had appeared where before there was none and it juggled ever so slightly when she walked. Overall, the changes were hardly noticeable, but they were there.

Realising she was incredibly short on time, Katie reached for her maternity pants. She hadn’t been planning to use them this early, but with her usual skirts taking longer and longer to get on with each passing week, she was left with little choice. 
 

Hurrying down stairs, Katie made a bee line for the kitchen. Opening the fridge, Katie instinctively grabbed a box of Brownies from the shelf, stuffed one into her mouth and rushed out to the car, panting slightly from the exertion.

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On 7/10/2023 at 2:26 PM, 1mn01 said:

Great direction so far, I really like where it’s headed. I hope there’s more soon.

I’m honestly not sure when the next one will be out. I’m currently working on something else since I’ve made a lot of mistakes on this one. However, I’ll try and update this as soon as possible. Thanks for all the support on this story!

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On 7/12/2023 at 3:41 AM, AidedDragon said:

I’m honestly not sure when the next one will be out. I’m currently working on something else since I’ve made a lot of mistakes on this one. However, I’ll try and update this as soon as possible. Thanks for all the support on this story!

The key to good writing is being patient. It takes time man. Don’t feel rushed. That’s where a lot of stories crash and burn.  

Not only that. But you can also re write it if you don’t  the current trajectory. A lot of the big names in this incredibly niche sub-sub-genre of Erotica have done that before. 

 

 

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Making it less dickish sounding, it sounded very narcissistic which was not the intent of the message
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