Hey, I bought & read it- I really like your writing style! The description scenes of the teacher’s body & the tightening clothes were especially great.
If you’re interested in some very opinionated feedback, I felt like Ms. Keller’s gain zoomed a bit too fast to 200. I personally enjoy the slow buildup from from skinny to +5lbs, +8lbs, +12lbs, etc.
Of course, this is just my tastes- pace the gain according to your own preferences, but if you were to write another story that’s a slow-burn I would be very, very interested
Keep up the great work!