Jazzman Posted February 5, 2017 Share Posted February 5, 2017 I like this. robby84263, ulvrik and WalkingFed 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazzman Posted February 9, 2017 Share Posted February 9, 2017 On 2/6/2017 at 9:08 PM, WalkingFed said: From now on I'm going to break up the action and dialogue. Make it easier to read. Feedback is always welcome. Be mindful that auto correct can be Both a blessing and a curse. As in "it takes longer to "lather " a bigger body etc. No substitute for good old fashioned proofreading. Still Love the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazzman Posted February 11, 2017 Share Posted February 11, 2017 On 2/9/2017 at 7:08 PM, WalkingFed said: I know. I caught that after seeing it posted on here and couldn't edit it. Here's hoping I proofread better. Anyways not to hold everyone up lather (hold for laughter) new part coming up...now! Wonderful story. I swear I will let Everything else alone from here on.You're. You're Too good of a writer to misuse "you're ". ? WalkingFed 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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