fatowl Posted July 3, 2021 Share Posted July 3, 2021 Agree. Great story!! Excellent writing. Superb character development. The weight gain was too fast even for a regain. More romantic to build the sexual tension slowly and have the weight gain more realistic. A few bumps in the process are always good! Thanks! Juxtaterrestrial 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fatowl Posted July 4, 2021 Share Posted July 4, 2021 Thanks! I have read your story of Kelri. It is Great! Juxtaterrestrial 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fatowl Posted July 5, 2021 Share Posted July 5, 2021 Have you considered selling a PDF of the book for those that do not have Kindle? Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fatowl Posted October 15, 2021 Share Posted October 15, 2021 Great Story!! Have you considered writing a sequel? I would be interested in helping. Juxtaterrestrial 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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