greinskyn

Thanks for the work you've put in on the story!  It is a weird "Twilight Zone" feeling when reading it.  Like this Amber lives in a very similar alternate universe.
It is so fun to see different perspectives, and different choices.
I can't remember, but just now I was thinking about an idea I had... whether I wrote it or just thought about it.  But I imagined the young woman feeding Amber had run out of food.  She figures 'Oh well, I guess that is that'  Then just as she goes to stand up another girl speaks out in the darkness.  "Here try these."  Betty about comes out of her skin and quickly realizes there had been an audience of one watcher her for who knew how long.
Hadn't thought about that image for years.
Good Luck and happy writing!

I wonder how long it will take Brooke to figure things out?  I wonder how much she will piece things together...
I can just picture her running away from cheer practice; her bulging ass cheeks and thicker thighs jiggling.  In vain she tries to hide the sudden pounds, but not super successfully.  Perhaps she gets treated to some verbal barbs for a change.  Or even more hurtful; some words of advice or encouragement!
Imagine Brooke's surprise when she goes back to practice only to find her clothes rapidly tightening yet again.  As she runs off (Slower than before) she notes with horror that her tummy has joined in on the jiggle train.  Her arms are now packed tightly into her sleeves.
Mary sees her chance and points out Brooke's trouble areas with a smirk.  Crying and alone Brooke "wishes" Mary would know what it was like  to suddenly be fat like this.
After the fat suddenly vanishes does Brooke stay away from cheer practice?  or does she learn how to gain the weight only to redistribute it to other rivals?
Just daydreaming here.   Thanks for the brain fuel! 

I wonder how long it will take Brooke to figure things out?  I wonder how much she will piece things together...
I can just picture her running away from cheer practice; her bulging ass cheeks and thicker thighs jiggling.  In vain she tries to hide the sudden pounds, but not super successfully.  Perhaps she gets treated to some verbal barbs for a change.  Or even more hurtful; some words of advice or encouragement!
Imagine Brooke's surprise when she goes back to practice only to find her clothes rapidly tightening yet again.  As she runs off (Slower than before) she notes with horror that her tummy has joined in on the jiggle train.  Her arms are now packed tightly into her sleeves.
Mary sees her chance and points out Brooke's trouble areas with a smirk.  Crying and alone Brooke "wishes" Mary would know what it was like  to suddenly be fat like this.
After the fat suddenly vanishes does Brooke stay away from cheer practice?  or does she learn how to gain the weight only to redistribute it to other rivals?
Just daydreaming here.   Thanks for the brain fuel!