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literally the hottest girl on finnish tv has gained 40 pounds in 1 year
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Someone posted some new material on Yahoo under Lauren Alexis Hot Challenges https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=csC3ht1dTeM Get a look while you can... it usually doesn't stay up long.
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I wasn't sure how or whether to comment on this story until I saw where it was truly headed. It reminds me of an old story where the wish didn't turn out even remotely as planned... but don't want to spoil things. Either way, I think each path has great potential. Thanks for sharing.
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I was holding back hoping someone would mention Amber's new nighttime habit. How you were going to handle the growing counselor being away from Cabin 9 really held my interest. Was she going to be really hungry in the morning? Would she suddenly stop being bloated in the mornings and wonder why? Apparently her new subconscious desires refuse to be denied.
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Is it only me... or did anyone else picture Betty feeding Amber that candy bar Jenny had dropped? IDK, maybe people would feel horrified by that image, but I got a real kick picturing her savoring it in her sleep. Anyone else remember those 650 calorie muffins? What a diet bomb.
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What wonderful images! I can just see Amber barking orders and hurling insults with her tummy and ass jiggling. Seeing Jenny stand up for herself now that Amber is more of an equal than an example is a great turn of events. I'm sure others took notice. I was wondering when the gain would reach her chest. In addition to the extra movement, there must be some serious muffin top action going on. Allison's conflict of conscience over revenge played out nicely. Very well done.
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What a transformation already. Amber is getting the first tastes of what she held such derision for. These are my favorite moments. When the woman tries to hide those first pounds. How clothes can cling so deliciously to their ever widening frames. WOW. So many possibilities. Good Luck and happy writing!
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Thanks for the work you've put in on the story! It is a weird "Twilight Zone" feeling when reading it. Like this Amber lives in a very similar alternate universe.
It is so fun to see different perspectives, and different choices.
I can't remember, but just now I was thinking about an idea I had... whether I wrote it or just thought about it. But I imagined the young woman feeding Amber had run out of food. She figures 'Oh well, I guess that is that' Then just as she goes to stand up another girl speaks out in the darkness. "Here try these." Betty about comes out of her skin and quickly realizes there had been an audience of one watcher her for who knew how long.
Hadn't thought about that image for years.
Good Luck and happy writing!
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You're very welcome! It's been very challenging and rewarding to work on!
I can understand that, that's actually how I kinda see it too. It's not really the same Amber from the original story, but a similar Amber.
Yes, I've made a few different choices and added in a fair amount of scenes that were not in the original (some of them were mentioned or flashbacks, but not fully seen).
Haha, yes that moment was in the original, and it will make a return in my version. Although we never learn in the original who that mystery onlooker is...
Thank you! Haha I need all the luck I can get!
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Amazing work! I feel like I handed you a unfinished rock and you turned it into a diamond. The dialogue is believable and easy to read. Your characters are better developed and one can't help but identify with them. I just love the little internal observations and judgements. The expanded the plot sure shows a lot of promise for what is to come. Thanks for all your work. Grein
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Drive HANGRY!
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I have never seen anybody this famous that can simply disappear from view on TV, Print Media, or the Web... That is, until she WANTS to be seen. But, even then, the images that are available are so limited and controlled. Astounding.
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Great imagery as always. Melanie's plans evaporating along with the fit of her clothes is very enticing... especially with the added humiliation with Amber. Thanks for sharing!
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THIS is amazing. The sensations, the dawning awareness on her part... mix so well with her careful plans going up in smoke! You have us all primed for her journey. I for one can't wait to see how Mel reacts to her new figure. It certainly will make dressing and shopping more interesting.
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Katie's Necklace by; Brucejedi on thechangingmirror is a great one. There is a magic element, but her fight against the gaining is one of the best written I've ever come across.
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I love her being clueless initially. It is easy to justify as Melanie doesn't struggle with her weight. She's just not familiar with failure. It will be fun to see how she faces her struggles. That for me can be the real fun... especially with magic, as we know the futilty of the fight in the end. Hopefully, even if there are mental changes Mel puts up a good fight.
