smokeandmirrors44

I had a few conversations with Bobbobson about this story before he disappeared. Sadly he didnt say anything before he deleted his accounts. A real pity - itthiswas a brilliant story. Someone offered to finish it but then disappeared as well. From what I remember of my conversations with the author it was leading to a really amazing finish. Kim was going to lose the pagent because her weight gain was obvious to everyone (although no one knew the full extent of it because of her girdle). Kim would lose her temper and start screaming at Melanie (the winner), Melanie would then call her fat to her face and rip of her blouse to expose her girdle in front of everyone. There was going to be this epilogue where Kim was forced to return to school, but without her girdle, so everyone would see how fat she had become. She would carry on wearing the same tight miniskirts, the same tight tops revealing her huge breasts, but this time without the girdle it would be obvious how her big belly would spill over the tight skirt, and when she worse jeans everyone would see how her big belly and behind stopped her even being able to button the jeans. Kim would be forced to keep wearing the same tight clothes she always wore because Kim was desperate to rejoin the new "cool kids" group and the new School Prom Queen, Melanie, had decided to let her be the "fat friend" of the cool kids, but only letting her sit with her old cool kids posse on condition that she continue wearing her clothes without the girdle and being regularly humiliated for being chubby... I thought the idea of the epilogue, with the blackmail so Kim is reduced to being the fat girl in the cool group, and the idea that she has to keep wearing her tight sexy clothes, but this time without the girdle, was a brilliant idea. I think the author was really good at describing those scenes where Kim stuffed herself into too tight clothes and was planning to do a lot more, I think he was also planning to do the scene where she gets her girdle pulled off so everyone sees the process in reverse where she getss really fat. But sadly now no one will write this story Too bad

I think the original idea was for her to try and get elected Prom Queen at the graduation ball and get her dress and girdle ripped off by her rival. I had a few IM conversations with the author before he disappeared and I think that was the basic plan. The really great thing about this story is the focus on a vain lazy girl hiding how fat she is and then getting exposed and humiliated. Certainly the idea of Kim become high school fat girl instead of high school hot girl, and being forced to take the girdle off (how would she look in all those outfits if she wasnt able to use the girdle?) is really cool...