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Until the possessive sister had to ruin it :(

I'm cautiously optimistic it will eventually lead to a foursome, or at least a threesome, between them all (I have no confidence that the prude, glasses-wearing friend will get involved, but who knows?). He had to somehow get Kat back into the picture, so I guess now is as good as any time. However, I hope it doesn't take another 10 pages to return to the uh... 'action.'

My primary fear is that Kat's jealousy will lead to a lot of talking and screaming before they finally get fucking again.

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The first comic was awesome, so I had high hopes for this one. Alas, 27 pages, no fappable material. I'd rather watch paint dry. Pitty.

I think the problem is twofold:

1) He has a donation goal for every page, so the longer he can drag things out, the more he ultimately makes.

2) The dunderheads on Deviantart repeatedly refer to him as a 'god' (or goddess, when they are confused like some other people around here). That kind of praise can quickly inflate an ego. I think that when he is 'in the zone,' his work is quite amusing, somewhat funny, and superbly arousing. However, when he falls back these anime tropes -- which he seems to be doing more and more in this second iteration -- things get really thin.

I know, personally, I'm not interested in a whole lot of baggage with my fap material. The more you weigh these things down, the less easy they are to jerk it to. And, frankly, this one is so heavy with plot at this point that it's underwater. We've had one page of light nudity in twenty-seven, and shit just went stupid. I'm rapidly losing interest.

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so... why does this matter again?

Why not stay on topic?

Some of us are slightly bemused that people keep mentioning that "she" is hot. What else is there to say at this point? He updates sporadically in fits and starts, and the comic has completely derailed of late. It's a diversion, yes, but a welcome one.

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I'm not sure the comic is completely derailed.  The possessive, bratty, rich bitch outburst is just a catalyst for more kinky shit to come.  Considering that it's a comic about a confused, probably lesbian, possibly masochistic, food-addicted submissive whose only other sexual relationship is with her dominant, possessive, brat of a sister, I think it's almost a foregone conclusion that sexitime is nearly upon us... assuming the surprisingly attractive male transvestite author gets around to publishing more pages.

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Some of us are slightly bemused that people keep mentioning that "she" is hot. What else is there to say at this point? He updates sporadically in fits and starts, and the comic has completely derailed of late. It's a diversion, yes, but a welcome one.

Whatever she chooses to identify as is her business. Anyway, Breakfast with Sister was really good, so I'm holding out hope that this'll be too, even if it means waiting 3 months for the next page.

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Seeing as it's not costing me anything to check every week or two for a new page and then be either "Oh, that's nice" or "Meh, next page..." I don't see the need to berate and run down someone else's attempts at a comic that he's obviously happy about.

The way I see it, you don't like it, make one better yourself...

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Seeing as it's not costing me anything to check every week or two for a new page and then be either "Oh, that's nice" or "Meh, next page..." I don't see the need to berate and run down someone else's attempts at a comic that he's obviously happy about.

The way I see it, you don't like it, make one better yourself...

No, I'm sorry, the world doesn't work that way.

If someone designs a bridge, and it collapses after you drive across it, the response of the engineer is not "Pfff, you didn't pay for it. If you want better, build your own!" That kind of argument is the go-to play out of every fanboy since the dawn of eternity. I do not have to create a comic to comment on it. And yes, 28 pages of essentially nothing productive is stupid. Even the normally unyieldingly-supportive comments on Deviantart have begun to show chinks in the armor in the last couple of pages. Hell, page 28 even came with a disclaimer aimed at the critics!

He's losing his audience's attention, and he has nobody to blame but himself. It would have been possible to cram the majority of the plot seen thus far into ten pages or less. The thing feels padded.

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No, I'm sorry, the world doesn't work that way.

If someone designs a bridge, and it collapses after you drive across it, the response of the engineer is not "Pfff, you didn't pay for it. If you want better, build your own!" That kind of argument is the go-to play out of every fanboy since the dawn of eternity. I do not have to create a comic to comment on it. And yes, 28 pages of essentially nothing productive is stupid. Even the normally unyieldingly-supportive comments on Deviantart have begun to show chinks in the armor in the last couple of pages. Hell, page 28 even came with a disclaimer aimed at the critics!

He's losing his audience's attention, and he has nobody to blame but himself. It would have been possible to cram the majority of the plot seen thus far into ten pages or less. The thing feels padded.

Sadly I agree with this. The author is milking this for all it is worth. I mean have you seen the price per page? Considering the quality of material it is highway robbery.

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I think it's funny that the author is getting frustrated with the negativity, but mistakenly thinks people are against plot.  It's bad plot people have a problem with, not plot in general...

I don't even care about bad plot in this venue. It's a fap comic. Or, at least, it started that way. So, in my mind, it's basically like a porno. Some porn is just sex. Some porn sets that sex up with a dopey plot. But you generally don't sit around worrying about how stupid it is, because it quickly moves on to the sex.

The problem with this plot isn't that it's bad (though it definitely is), it's that it's running on f-o-r-e-v-e-r. I really almost feel like taking bets at this point on how many pages it will take before we see a naked chick again. 5? 10? More than 10? The characters are now angry at each other and outside. Given the pace at which he moves, how long will it take for them to reconcile, move indoors and then get naked? Probably quite a while.

If Kip wants to write a drama, he is more than free to. If he wants to write a porno, he is also more than free to. And if he wants to keep churning out this shit, well, it's a free country for that, too. But he shouldn't expect to be critic free. Because this is shit.

*Edit* Oh, and he posted another page.

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