snr6424 Posted August 30, 2013 Share Posted August 30, 2013 Wow, really wonderful additions. Love the addition of Sylvia and looking forward to seeing what develops with her and Nina and Janie. And of course can't wait to see what happens with the Julia/Kate bet, not to mention peeking back in on the "Vicki"/Mia storyline. I don't know how you juggle it all, but I'm certainly glad you do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyril Figgis Posted August 31, 2013 Share Posted August 31, 2013 I agree with snr6424. The new chapters and the other additions throughout the story are great! I love that you went back and edited some parts around to add more to the characters, and to make the gaining more interesting. Jenny's plight of every girl in the world wanting to feed her is such a delight to read, and I cannot wait to see where you go with her new angle. The change with Tina is just fantastic, and I cannot wait to see more of that storyline; you hooked me with the "Fatter, FAtter, FATter..." piece. And I love, love, love how you've fleshed out (heh) Kelly's role in all this, making her this devious little dominatrix while also presenting a more vulnerable side to her through Kate. It's amazing that you can keep track of all these different stories; a timeline of the whole story would look absolutely insane! But you do it so well, and I like how you tie them all back into each other with certain events, like the Halloween party. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shammyboy Posted September 3, 2013 Share Posted September 3, 2013 Any plans to reupload your Office Girls story? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coop Posted September 8, 2013 Share Posted September 8, 2013 Woo! Finally a continuation. Love it! And nice rewrite too! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unload123 Posted February 24, 2016 Share Posted February 24, 2016 Has this story been updated anywhere? Love the story, but haven't seen anything new in a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
montuemon Posted February 24, 2016 Share Posted February 24, 2016 Is this some kind of necropost record? xandercroft 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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