Roberto Posted July 8, 2021 Share Posted July 8, 2021 Looking for stories with an arrogant female protagonist, where the woman feels she can easily lose the weight, only to find she’s stuck as a fat girl. OR, a girl who enters a relationship with a feeder, thinking there’s no way she will gain weight, only to be proven wrong. I’ll start with three: Polaris Dreamer’s Update of The Arrangement titled “Pound for Pound” https://www.deviantart.com/polarisdreamer/art/Pound-for-Pound-Part-1-879519364 CrudeAtom’s “Real Influence” https://www.deviantart.com/crudeatoms/art/Real-Influence-879156917 snr6424’s “Biting Off Too Much” https://www.deviantart.com/snr6424/art/Biting-Off-A-Bit-Too-Much-444098972 Enjoy! Zappy, Optimus, Batman76 and 4 others 3 2 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Batman76 Posted July 8, 2021 Share Posted July 8, 2021 1 hour ago, Roberto said: Looking for stories with an arrogant female protagonist, where the woman feels she can easily lose the weight, only to find she’s stuck as a fat girl. OR, a girl who enters a relationship with a feeder, thinking there’s no way she will gain weight, only to be proven wrong. I’ll start with three: Polaris Dreamer’s Update of The Arrangement titled “Pound for Pound” https://www.deviantart.com/polarisdreamer/art/Pound-for-Pound-Part-1-879519364 CrudeAtom’s “Real Influence” https://www.deviantart.com/crudeatoms/art/Real-Influence-879156917 snr6424’s “Biting Off Too Much” https://www.deviantart.com/snr6424/art/Biting-Off-A-Bit-Too-Much-444098972 Enjoy! Check this: Roberto, >_< 0_0, riptoryx and 1 other 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Verom Posted July 9, 2021 Share Posted July 9, 2021 https://www.deviantart.com/logitechk1/art/Power-of-Propaganda-2-The-Invasion-chapter-1-856777794 You don't get any more arrogant then Princess Emilia! (Note this is a sequel story, but it works fine as a standalone tale. While I highly recommend the first, it does not fit as much in the arrogance factor.) SilverPathfinder and Roberto 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest high Posted July 12, 2021 Share Posted July 12, 2021 A great story by one gifted writer, Kid A. It's criminal that he hasn't written anything in a while. Virtual Reality Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tester908787 Posted July 13, 2021 Share Posted July 13, 2021 On 1/24/2020 at 4:42 AM, noresa said: The story I always come back to is "Kim", an epic tale of well-deserved weight gain schadenfreude. Kim is the Alpha Bitch, a mean, stuck up, blisteringly hot girl who rules her high school with a cruel attitude and unmatched looks. She's vain, prissy, and deliciously bitchy - a villain protagonist we love to hate. Some seem to side with Kim (although I could never understand this), while most can't wait for her to get what's coming. The author of this story skillfully weaves together themes of gluttony, denial, humiliation, narcissism, hiding weight gain, fear of exposure and more. This story is in a sense "archetypal" because it takes these themes to their absolute limit. Kim is the hottest, the meanest, the most stuck up girl. She's completely obsessed with her physical appearance and social status. At the beginning of the story, she's at at the absolute top of the social ladder (which, lucky for us, means she has the farthest to fall) in the setting where social status matters most - high school. In particular in the exaggerated form it takes in this story, this is the environment where one is under the most under scrutiny, and one's standing is most vulnerable to collapse. Even Ashley and Jenna, the two main secondary characters, exist mainly as more personified versions of the pressures squeezing in on Kim. Right from the first chapters, we understand that gaining weight is the most humiliating thing that can happen in this world (save perhaps, hiding it and being found out). Gaining even a little weight is totally unthinkable for Kim, but as her inner glutton begins to take hold, her figure feels the effects and it becomes her greatest fear that anyone find out. Kim's prissy, vain attitude is continually contrasted by the embarrassing scenarios she finds herself in, as she tries to desperately hide her weight gain from her friends and the gossiping crowds at school. Kim begins to use more and more extreme ways to cover up the gain, including "industrial strength" shapewear. Here the story subtly blends in the fantastic, without losing its realistic feel. Kim's girdle, the undergarment she resorts to when her gain is too much to just "suck in", is an almost magical artifact, keeping her public appearance slim and trim no matter how much she pigs out in private. It's a wonderful plot device, made all the better as it becomes central to her fear of being exposed ("Do they know? Oh my God they know! No - they can't... That would be...). The fantastic powers of the girdle allow Kim to keep up the charade, fooling the crowds of onlookers and making us wonder whether she'll really get away with it. Kim's ultimate goal is to be crowned prom queen - the grand prize that will confirm her top spot in the social hierarchy. Her only competitor is her rival Melanie, a gracious, elegant foil for Kim's blustering, bullying ego. Melanie is always presented as tasteful, calm, and casually in control. She's effortlessly fit, beautiful and well-liked. Kim is puffed up, conceited, and desperate. She exudes arrogance, explodes in anger, then secretly gorges on junk food, unable to control her appetites. The reader takes great pleasure in watching her strain under the tension of polarity - haughty to the extreme on the outside yet maximally self conscious and terrified of being exposed on the inside. We watch her squirm as she's caught in increasingly tight (no pun intended) situations as the world looks on eagerly to discover what she's hiding. The author also cleverly uses a number of common tropes. For example, in Chapter 18, Kim crosses the "moral event horizon" by "kicking the dog" (or in this case, an unfortunate nerdy girl in the cafeteria) and the reasonable reader (as well as the unreasonable reader who remains on her side) deems her unredeemable. It is only then that we are served Kim's final humiliation - the ultimate schadenfreude, a perfect comeuppance as Kim gets exactly what she deserves in an impossibly delicious humiliation conga where all of her greatest fears come true. A fitting end to an epic tale. The story starts here: and ends here: Enjoy! Stefarno, bbgirllvr and Roberto 2 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zappy Posted July 17, 2021 Share Posted July 17, 2021 All of these are brilliant. Classics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roberto Posted July 28, 2021 Author Share Posted July 28, 2021 I’ve been really into this theme lately, so here are a few more. There’s just something that draws me in so perfectly when a thin, arrogant girl tempts fate by taking her figure for granted. a donut a day will make you fat - bobiscool18 - some coworkers get free donuts with their job, and the daily indulgence slowly adds up https://www.deviantart.com/bobiscool18/art/A-Donut-a-Day-Will-Make-You-Fat-Weight-Gain-Story-876770477 A good friend - PiritaArgenta - a girl offers to gain a little weight to help her fat friend’s self esteem, https://www.deviantart.com/piritaargenta/art/A-good-friend-644695552 You’re going to get fat! - Maverick An slim older sister with a penchant for junk food ignores the warnings of her younger, chubby sister regarding the consequences of her indulgence https://www.deviantart.com/maverickthewriter/art/You-re-Going-to-Get-Fat-825238302 Alex - ShrubberyLogistics A classic story where a girl intentionally begins to gain weight in order to fill out a prom dress https://www.deviantart.com/shrubberylogistic/art/Alex-667462286 123Fps, connectwithfrie, riptoryx and 1 other 3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
riptoryx Posted July 28, 2021 Share Posted July 28, 2021 Regarding "You're Going to Get Fat" by @Maverick, it's also available in audiobook form. Here's a link to a thread with the audiobook as a streaming video: Roberto 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
richman92 Posted July 28, 2021 Share Posted July 28, 2021 I am enjoying this one, be warned it's unfinished though. It's about really arrogant soccer player who has BBW of a mother and father who owns a bistro. Like Mother, Like Daughter by TheDman759 https://www.deviantart.com/thedman759/art/WG-Like-Mother-Like-Daughter-pt-1-853447941 ss.sarano, Roberto and connectwithfrie 1 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
datdaemon Posted July 28, 2021 Share Posted July 28, 2021 https://www.deviantart.com/weeb-lord/art/Continuing-Education-785652909 This one's got arrogance, mild humiliation and karma Roberto 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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