swahilimonkfish Posted April 12, 2019 Share Posted April 12, 2019 Just something a bit different that I've been posting on my DA page. Playing around with story telling form etc. Instagram Feed Li Fangsu Lifangsu8 Social media influencer and lover of fashion and travel Post #183 The top two thirds of the picture are a blistering orange-red sky searing from the setting sun at the centre but fraying into streaky navy blue darkness at the periphery. The sun is setting into a cool vista of lapping waves that scatter the refracted sunlight across its surface like in a van Gogh landscape. The near third of the image is wet sand with a thin veneer of surface water coating the sandy grains like icing. Two sets of footprints can be seen sweeping in from the left side to the centre where the camera catches two half-silhouetted figures. A tall, well-built man with blue-black skin is lifting above his head the dainty figure of a girl with dark brown hair fanning out in motion. The man is just wearing beach shorts down to his knees, leaving his impressive torso on display. His dark skin looks like it is vacuum fitted over an upper body of muscle and form, with impressive pectorals resting atop a defined abdomen. His arms, outstretched and aloft in the air carrying his belle, wield jutting triceps and clear definition over the biceps on the inside of his arm. His head is lean and clean with a well-cared for goatee outlining his mouth, and his eyebrows as the only hairs on his head. The woman in the picture has her lithe legs off the ground and akimbo, and her bikini connected by a sleek midriff with lines of muscle running down it. The bikini is flowery with navy blue background and white flowers interspersed throughout, and the top pushes up her modest décolletage. Her head shows a beaming grin flashing bright white teeth and her eyes closed as she is swung about. Her nose is slight and dainty on her heavily cheekboned face and her shoulderblades surge outwards with the force of movement. Last sunset in playa del carman. Its been a dream. You will be missed. #mexico2018 #beautifulsunset #memoriesforever #loveyoumarcus summergrrl97 OMG soooo perfect pretlitliar I want ur life!!! danniwaves perfect husband perfect beach perfect life! So jell sista 2113 views June 22nd 2017 Post #184 A picture of a balcony framed by the open doors that lead to it. The balcony railings are black and marbled. On the table in the centre of the frame are two empty cocktail glasses. Behind them is a dark townscape illuminated by the bursts of yellow from the streetlights below and the duller orange from the lights still on. Behind the rows of hotels and buildings is rich navy sky with a chalky white crescent moon in the top right-hand corner of the picture. Will miss this place. What views! Would recommend the Hotel Casa del Sol and drinks so good. Husband not bad either haha. Jst consumating the marriage some more haha #hotelcasasol #besthoneymooneva #loveyoumarcus #loveyoumexico #whatsyourmexicomemory jennlovez69 luv u grrrl. now have a gud nite lol diamandladyg so classy haha! Hotelcasasol hope you had a great time 643 views June 22nd 2017 Post #185 The picture is of the apartment. The walls are white, the carpet is white and the bed sheets are white, but the saturated blanched aesthete is interrupted by the light mahogany bed frame. The bed is made and by the side of it are two full travel bags, one a scarlet red and the other dark blue. Standing behind them is Marcus, wide mouthed and seemingly laughing at something causing him to lean forward with giggles. He’s wearing a hugging pastel tee that hugs his masculine body and orange shorts, with wraparound shades on his well-groomed head. On his wrist is an expensive looking watch, flashy and silver and glinting in the early morning sun through the window One last picture, sorry coudn’t resist chenlovesthesun The fam is looking forward to seeing you soon sister! dbminnesotadreamin so jealous of your sexy husband, i need to get me one of them pretlitliar cant believe how perfect you two are OMG 586 views June 23rd 2017 Post #186 The picture is a top-down picture of a shallow white bowl on a red velvet surface. On this bowl is a stack of fluffy white rice, with two thick cuts of salmon on top, smeared lavishly with a thick, creamy, juandice-yellow squash blossom sauce, garnished with a sprig of coriander. And decorated the grated avocado and black eyed beans for texture, flavour and to interrupt the garish yellow of the sauce, seared pink of the fish and the sanitised white of the bowl. Haha, going thru my pics from the holz and forgot to post this food pic. wouldn’t normally post this but this meal was soooo good I could have married it, sorry Marcus haha. Shape of water but instead its this salmon haha #restaurantlacasitamexicana #foodtodiefor #foodpics #foodporn #sogood #treatyoself #loveyoumexico twomangos haha ur so fuuny I luv u barryfrombarry This looks delish, luv mexican food and luv salmon annasweeteepie just stumbled cross this blog and im in love with you grrl, new follower for sure lifangsu8 @annasweeteepie thanks sugar, dont normally post food pics but mite have to now haha 42k views June 25th 2017 Post #187 Li Fangsu is at the centre of the picture with her arms wrapped around the family members of the picture. She is dressed in a floral tea dress that doesn’t go down as far as her knees, revealing her bony legs and not covering her dainty arms. From left to right: Li Jaopeng, man of the house and Fangsu’s dad. A stout and sturdy man with an unselfconscious grin, he’s wearing a pink polo shirt and white shorts. His hair is thinning but still dark and parted to the side, and his eyes are obscured by his thin-rimmed glasses. Next, Li Mei, the more stoically faced matriarch of the family, with a round face framed with dark hair showing the first signs of transitioning to grey. She’s noticeably short and not slender, a look not embellished with her casual American clothing. After Fangsu we have Chen, the younger sister of Fangsu in a polka dot wrap dress with sunglasses over her eyes and her tongue hanging out. Chen is clearly as slim as her sister, though lacking her muscular foundation, and 3 inches taller, making her 5ft8 and the tallest of the three women in the family. Back at home with the fam. Missed my mom and dad. Missing mexicos heat though [laughing crying emoji]. Rititiki08 how cute r ur family tho, ur sis is so cute jambalayajenny love the dress grrrl, r those flowers? lifangsu8 @jambalayajenny thanks, bought it in paris, sooo cute. all my dresses have flowers on, my name means ‘fragrant flower’ in chinese so i wear them with pride lol jambalayajenny @lifangsu8 that is so cute, wish my name meant something apart from short for generator lol 812 views June 29th 2017 Post #188 A picture of Fangsu and Chen each eating a Cuban Sandwich from the Miami seafront promenade that they are walking along, with the blistering sun behind them and people milling about in the background. Both girls are closing their eyes as they are pulling the meaty mouthful away from the sandwich in exaggerated fashion. Both girls are just wearing tees and shorts in the hot weather. The photographer is presumably Marcus, but we cannot tell for sure. Miami does the best street food! And gr8 to be with my sis before she goes to yale in the autumn. #soproudgrrl #thesmartoneinthefam oprahfan33 is that a cuban sandwich from the sandwich shop on the seafront? they are so gud their. lifangsu8 @oprahfan33 yes they r the best. lifangsu8 omg wots with all these views. yall must be hungry all the time lol cos any pic with food goes crazy haha 29k views July 3rd 2017 Post #189 Fangsu and Marcus are posing outside an Italian restaurant, each dressed up formally, Marcus in a white shirt and black pants, Fangsu in a frilly white dress with thin pink carnations printed on as the design. Marcus is squinting as his attempt to smoulder, and Fangsu is pulling ‘duckface’. The restaurant itself looks smart from the outside, with ambient lighting pouring through the external window. The night is quite young and the sky still keeping its bluish hues. This hunky dude is taking me for a meal downtown at Alphonse’s. Looove the pasta here [heart-eyes emoji] #alphonses #greatpasta fellinifan812 pasta is sooo good hombreamigo4 been here, food good. and you are such a pretty cuople bastiandbesti lol at marcuss tryin to look sxy u dont av 2 try u alreddy sxy 1124 views July 6th 2017 Post #190 A white bowl with white and thick tagliatelle in a white carbonara sauce. Fortunately color comes in the form of grey porcini mushrooms and pink bacon. Next to the bowl is a flute of pink champagne. The bowl of food hasn’t been touched yet, but the champagne has. Oh my god I loooove this place. Food was sooo good, and washed down with bubbles because a girl has to, rite? #alphonses #greatpasta #piinkchampagne #champagneforthelady twomangos sooo pretty, bet it tastes so gud noobiewan-kanoobie TREAT. YO. SELF. limpetgurl love ur food pics, always the best. Ur the best on instagram imo. Luv u gurl lifangsu8 @limpetgurl thanx, got an amazin bf who knows how 2 treat me rite 62k views July 6th 2017 Post #191 A bowl of Chinese noodle broth in a blue bowl. Steam is surging from the soup, indicating it has been freshly made. The focus of the photo is on the broth foreground, but the fuzzy background reveals Mei standing in the background Real talk time: I am a travel instagrammer, but I can’t always go on holiday because holidays cost money. Fo real. But you guys have been viewing like crazy my food pics so I’m gonna make more effort to eat at nice places for y’all, in between my holz. This one is homemade food though, thanks mom! fellinifan812 yes, moar food pics lol. But srsly, u do u and ul make it work. luv ur food pics but luv u 2. danniwaves been a follower since ur holiday to mauritius in ‘14, but luving this new stuff too. and ur mom is an amazing cook! lifangsu8 @danniwaves ha, yes i remember u from back then 1 of my 1st followers. thanx for the support, its scary changing this channel but u guyz seem to luv it so much danniwaves @lifangsu8 change is gud sometimes, mix it up. luv urself and be true to urself. lifangsu8 @danniwaves thanx danni. hope i dont get fat tho, all this food is too good! fellinifan812 @lifangsu8 you’ll always be beautiful lifangsu8 @fellinifan812 thanx grl, u no i will! 38k views July 11th 2017 Post #192 In the right hand corner of the focused foreground is a roaring barbecue, with skewers of chicken in a honeyed glaze being licked by the fiery coals red flames. In the unfocused background are the hazy silhouettes of the Li family, drinking cold alcoholic beverages and laughing with one another. The garden that they are standing in as half-paved, and Fangsu is sitting on the paved steps between the patio and the grassy garden, drinking lager and affectionately leaning on her now-husband. He is wearing just shorts, his enviable torso being on full display, and Fangsu is wearing a loose tie-dye shirt and denim shorts that present her pins. Summertime, and the living is easy! Lovin life wit the fam. Sun is out so dads on the bbq burnin his babygirls some chicken Moanerlisa18 just luv tht shirt simple n clasy! yabbadabbadoo your so hot i would luv to bend you over and fuk u lifangsu8 @yabbadabbadoo ugh men r soo gross 41k July 13th 2017 Post #193 A close-up of Fangsu’s face. It is blotchy and red on her right cheek. Fangsu is wearing no make-up and her hair is wet from the shower she’s just had. The top of the towel can just about be seen below her shoulders. Her face is filled with concentration as she eyes the break in her skin complexion. Real girl, real skin. Not everyone is perfect, we all have flaws, just got to embrace them. This is the real me and I love me warts and all. #realme2017 #iaintafraidofnospots jaggerinojaggerino u luk sso pretty nd im so jelly i cant dare show my face w/out mkeup haha briansurgeon69 beautiful, inside and out rhitwothree proud of u grl 849 views July 15th 2017 Post #194 Fangsu is striking a pose in her bodylength bathroom mirror. Her hair is flowing like a black waterfall down her cheeks as she tilts her head to one side in her pose. Her face is pulling pursed lips at the camera and the hand not carrying the phone is gesturing a sideways v-sign. She has an ornate silver necklace around her neck and matching and similarly elaborately decorated earrings in her ears. Her body is wrapped in a black bodywrap dress with striking purple flowers on it. It hugs her humble curves, showing very little chest but revealing plenty of thigh at the other end. The dress is also tight around the centre, hugging what is possibly burgeoning softness but might also just be the way the shadows catch the dress. Looking good, rocking this gorgeous dress from #Zara, love the colors and the way it flicks out at the shoulder #loveZara #Zarahaul #spon summergrrl97 luv zara but they never do my size lol hadesinshades such a nice dress but u have to be real pretty to pull it off trixievangogh99 i hav a dress lyk this but red flowers n i luv it 1.1k views July 17th 2017 Post #195 Fangsu and Chen are sitting in chic and hipster take on the traditional US diner called The Star Spangled Diner, with retro 50’s US décor and with the serving staff all dressed in Grease style costumes as Pink Ladies and the males were dressed in preppy 50’s white blazers and salmon pink trousers. Sitting at a dining booth amongst the hubbub, Fangsu is using a selfie stick to take a photo of her and her sister. They have strawberry milkshakes to drink in tall ridged glasses, and a substantial burger and double-fried fries to eat. The burger in front of Fangsu is a hearty chunk of beef with slaw and gherkin and Monterrey Jack cheese, as well as lettuce and sliced tomato and a spicy tomato relish. Chen is having the same but with a milder relish and no gherkin. They are both dressed in white and yellow college-style blazer, white blouse and knee-high white socks. They both look sleek and on fleek, and while sitting next to her skinny sister isn’t as flattering as it might be and alludes to a slight puffiness in comparison to her more slender sister, Fangsu’s appearance is mitigated by the flattering angle of the photo. Don’t be fooled, we’re US girls through and through. Loving this old skool vibe and look! bensoncatlover luv the style sistas! its electrifying! ghostman22 fangsu lukin gud but ur sister is soo hot lifangsu8 @ghostman22 hey fuck you asshole, leave my sister alone creep chenlovesthesun @lifangsu8 thanx sis but u dont need to protect me, ive herd worse lifangsu8 @chenlovesthesun just lookin out for my lil sis cos I luv u chenlovesthesun @lifangsu8 lyk i kno n all, jus sayin i can handle shit myself n dont need u always at my back lifangsu8 @chenlovesthesun hey maybe leave that shit off my instagram, u got a prob just say 2 my face and dont do it in public chenlovesthesun @lifangsu8 lol im not making the drama, ur makin the drama lifangsu8 @chenlovesthesun i was just sticking up for u, y u being such an asshole for havin ur back? chenlovesthesun @lifangsu8 ha yeh rite, we no why n its cos u jellus sis. its not u they want to fuck for a change, now ive got in shape and uv put on sum weight 63k July 21st 2017 Post #196 Fangsu and Marcus are kissing with the red Miami sun silhouetting their tender affection through the window. Despite being silhouetted, you can just about see that Fangsu’s chin is not as defined as it was in the first photos. Love the people who love you for who you are. fellinifan812 god hope u r ok lifangsu8 @fellinifan812 yeah all good thanx, ur looking at a strong woman and her awesome husband fellinifan812 @lifangsu8 phew so relieved! 4.6k July 30th 2017 Post #197 Marcus is posing in running gear, squinting down the camera. His running top is red, thin and tight, with moisture wicking fabric, and his shorts are matching. He is standing outside on a forested trail outside of Miami. Next to him, leaning her head against her husband, is Fangsu. She is wearing a black lycra croptop with grey flower silhouettes across it and grey and black running tights. The crop top reveals a stomach that is no longer as chiselled as before. It is softer and the tight top and shorts pinch at the sides where they meet the midriff. The running tights show her legs to still be lean. The sun is pouring through the trees to create a dappled effect. Getting fit and feeling fierce! Ready to kick some ass with a trail run, burn off that summer indulgence #thinspo jokoono wot sumer indulgnce mks me angry tht grls be lyk this wot abt my fat ass huh? lifangsu8 @jokoono not fat shaming, you can look good at all sizes honey jokoono if u cn luk gd at all size thn y u runnin bitch. rodderz forget the haterz fangsu, haterz guna hate yo 433 views August 2nd 2017 Post #198 A plate with boiled asparagus, fresh peas with mint, served alongside new potatoes and seared salmon on a plane white plate. No accoutrements. Just that. Refuels and tastes good. Gots to love them greens haha #thinspo ddclare nope lol yasmania @ddclare ikr ddclare @yasmania girl. needs. sauce. ya feel? yasmine @ddclare if i wnted sumthin that dry i callin my bf haha ddclare @yasmine amen haha 293 views August 2nd 2017 Post #199 We see a row of women running on treadmills, all donning form-fitting lycra that hug their slender bodies. The nearest treadmill is not currently in use, but there is a SportsMax bottle filled with water in the water holder and a towel draped over the side. In the near foreground is the sweaty face of Fangsu. Her forehead is glistening in the light. She is wearing wraparound sunglasses that cover a fair bit of her face. The rest of it appears well-cared for. There is a thumbs up gesture from the girl. Loving Johnny’s Gym and Sauna. Great facilities and really good aircon lol. #notspon #wheredidallthesponsorsgo fellinifan812 ugh limpetgurl miss the food pix fellinifan812 @limpetgurl same limpetgurl i dnt check out IG for pics of runnin machines lifangsu8 hey friendz and any one else who wants to bitch abt my fotos, go screw urself. i have a life + i post these free of charge 4 u + all i get is abuse so if u dont lyk it, u no where the door is limpetgurl whateva bithc, now we no were all the sponsers went haha 112 views August 3rd 2017 Post #200 Just a picture of Fangsu’s face, her eyes diverted to one side in thought. On the screen is the following message: real talk ive been having a real tough time recently, family stuff. and when i need u guys the most u dont seem to be here and i dont no what im doing wrong Update – think I might leave IG for a bit and clear my head. don’t need the negativity danniiwaves miss you but ur health is the most imp thing azzytheboxer typ ig girl goes viral doin cool shit stops doin cool shit n be lyk were did all yall go lifangsu8 @azzytheboxer what cool shit??? I cant go to mexico for ig azzytheboxer dopeass food pics muddafukka!!! lifangsu8 @azzytheboxer my salmon pics got like no views tho azzytheboxer hey grl u deaf or sum shit. i said DOPEASS food pics not sum rabbit food bullshit lifangsu8 @azzytheboxer yeh but im countin calories. cant be piling on the pounds for ig azzytheboxer hey ur call but i dont go onto ig to luk at food i CAN eat i go on to luk @ food i CANT eat. rekkon eerbody da same yo. i wanna see food i no i cnt eat cus to much dolla or to mny calorys or sum shit 189 views August 5th 2017 Post #201 A slab of black slate runs diagonally across the photo, with the wooden table visible in either corner of the frame. On the black slate is an assortment of sushi dishes. There are four sushi rolls in a row, wrapped in seaweed with white rice wrapped around yellow filling. Then there are shrimp tempura running next to it with the shrimp tails pointing upwards. There are cuts of raw fish in red orange and white cut thinly and spread across the slate. Then there are rolls wrapped in salmon as opposed to nori. Near the other end of the slate of Japanese food is a deep brown sweet dipping sauce in a white bowl. There are two pairs of chopsticks running through the middle of the slate. Gotta luv sushi! Xoxo ranikalafa9 good to see you bk and food looks soooo good babcadominika62 sushi is my favoruite yummy whitesoxsaviour22 glad ur bk, hope u iz gud sista food luks cray gud azzytheboxer da reel shit aw yea 22k views August 22nd 2017 Post #202 It is a close-up of cajun-spiced chicken. You can see a caramelised brown chicken skin with flecks of green and red across the surface. It looks warm, there is the subtle hint of steam coming from the meat. At the heart of the picture is where the chicken has been bitten. The warm white threads of meat beyond the sweet and warming skin look succulent and moist, but without being pink. The whole picture looks moreish. Mom knows how to cook but Dad knows how to grill *heart-eyes emoji* *heart-eyes emoji*. Luv you dad. But not as much as luv that cajun flavoring u put on the chicken haha spamspamspamspam swop dads. my pop jst cooks microwave meals sprinkels basil over da top nd call it cooking youngnfree129233 OMG can you believe you can save THOUSANDS of dollars with this simple trick! Just click [here] and make lots of money $$$$ wossy99 fkin spam spamspamspamspam hey wots ur problem wossy wossy99 @spamspamspamspam haha sry i ment the spam bot lol not u spamspamspamspam i no, jst a joke. dis chanel so big she get bots tho. fangsu hittin da big leag wossy99 she so gets bots, tahts were the views r cumin frm in the 1st place lol lifangsu8 @wossy99 wot you sayin bout me using bots bitch wossy99 not u grl, sme peeps r bottin ur chanel tho thats y ur views r so cray 87k views August 24th 2017 Post #203 Li Fangsu is wearing the same floral dress from back in #187. But it looks considerably tighter on her. Her arms are thicker, her face less pointed, her shoulder blades less bladed, and the dress hugs her waist to show where it has been softening. She is hugging her boyfriend Marcus, who is wearing designer tee and sports shorts for a casual but attractive look. He looks well groomed as her stares at the camera with a nonchalant smile, while Fangsu is just pursing her lips at the camera. Her hair up at the back and her make-up brings out her eyes. In the background is a bottle of wine. Just date nite with my husbando. Sooo glad to be married to this man #loveyoumarcus. And thanks to Chen for the wine! #sistersforeva #alwaystogether sharncarpenter73FBPE so glad you and your sister have made up. Sending love from the UK hon chenlovesthesun no worries sis! hope u lyk the vino lifangsu8 luurved the vino haha jackielovesthecock you. rock. that. dress. tell us ur secrets cos u look liek a princess and i am here for it 55k views August 26th 2017 Post #204 Picture taken at an upward angle of a topless Marcus, with just a towel around his lower half. His chest is waxes and his pectorals pronounced. He’s carrying in his arms a thin mahogany tray. On the tray are several pancakes with syrup and blueberries draped luxuriously across the top. Next to the plate is a half-glass that has been half-filled (or half-emptied, depending on your optimism) with freshly pressed orange juice, with the fibres still in. The perfect man. The perfect husband. The perfect gentleman fellinifan812 the perfect breakfast gollemmcdonald sooo jelly rn dickvandykevandick hubba hubba hubby roseanne01 i wants one of them. does he have a twin i can borrow *winky face* 91k views August 28th 2017 Post #205 Just a picture of a cut tomato. Nothing more, nothing less Test 1 ronanthefelator ??? sonarluvver12 wha? Nunuwren I think she’s broken guys chazzawilliams94 she borked ressedeezer oh no thedavester69 broke linnie19thit was good wile it lasted 288 views September 3rd Post #206 Just a picture of a McDonalds wrapper. Nothing more, nothing less Test 2 Nunuwren dead. she dead. she so broken morrnecot switch her off n on again lifangsu8 @morrnecot ahahaha lifangsu8 not broken, just testing something ddclare wots goin on lifangsu8 @wossy99 ur right. im being botted. 121k views September 3rd John Smith, Qedrian41, Batman76 and 3 others 2 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Batman76 Posted April 13, 2019 Share Posted April 13, 2019 Love the concept. And you got the vapid idiocy of insta comments down pat. swahilimonkfish and John Smith 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Smith Posted April 13, 2019 Share Posted April 13, 2019 Argh, Instagrammers can be such a swath of soulless bitches while commenting.... 🙄 swahilimonkfish 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swahilimonkfish Posted April 13, 2019 Author Share Posted April 13, 2019 2 hours ago, Batman76 said: Love the concept. And you got the vapid idiocy of insta comments down pat. Hahaha, glad that you thought so. My secret superpower is to sound like a nineteen year old American girl called Madison Qedrian41 and >_< 0_0 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swahilimonkfish Posted April 13, 2019 Author Share Posted April 13, 2019 1 hour ago, John Smith said: Argh, Instagrammers can be such a swath of soulless bitches while commenting.... 🙄 Yeah, they're fantastic aren't they 😀😀 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Smith Posted April 13, 2019 Share Posted April 13, 2019 4 minutes ago, swahilimonkfish said: Yeah, they're fantastic aren't they 😀😀 Blimey! Aren't they anytime?? 😂😂 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>_< 0_0 Posted April 13, 2019 Share Posted April 13, 2019 12 hours ago, swahilimonkfish said: Hahaha, glad that you thought so. My secret superpower is to sound like a nineteen year old American girl called Madison I thought you sounded like TheSpiffingBrit from YouTube 👀 Maxarator 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swahilimonkfish Posted April 13, 2019 Author Share Posted April 13, 2019 34 minutes ago, >_< 0_0 said: I thought you sounded like TheSpiffingBrit from YouTube 👀 You know that meme that of Capt. America saying "I understood that reference", I need one for "I didn't understand that reference, what do those words mean?". But I am a spiffing Brit so maybe I am this person and I've never realised Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
watashiismyaccount Posted April 19, 2019 Share Posted April 19, 2019 Logged on and commenting for the first time in ages just to say I've really enjoyed this story. Been waiting for someone to use the foodie concept properly, i think you can definitely consider this a successful proof of concept! Great example of show don't tell writing too, which is a rarity in WG fiction. You do have plans to continue this right? I'll be checking back everyday for updates, super keen for it. swahilimonkfish 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swahilimonkfish Posted April 19, 2019 Author Share Posted April 19, 2019 Just now, watashiismyaccount said: Logged on and commenting for the first time in ages just to say I've really enjoyed this story. Been waiting for someone to use the foodie concept properly, i think you can definitely consider this a successful proof of concept! Great example of show don't tell writing too, which is a rarity in WG fiction. You do have plans to continue this right? I'll be checking back everyday for updates, super keen for it. Wow, thank you, I feel humbled! And, as a foodie, I know what you mean. Hopefully more will follow suit. I do have plans to continue it, but I wouldn't check every day for updates... I might be a while, I'm afraid. It took me a couple of months to collate all those posts together so the next installment won't be imminent. Sorry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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