mickylane Posted October 17, 2018 Share Posted October 17, 2018 My first attempt at a WG story, hope you guys enjoy. Just part one so it will pick up soon. https://www.deviantart.com/mickylane/art/Pots-and-Pans-Part-1-768651940?ga_submit_new=10%3A1539747174 GetThiccer, John Smith, jwhales and 11 others 6 2 1 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Smith Posted October 17, 2018 Share Posted October 17, 2018 That was a nice starting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coop Posted October 18, 2018 Share Posted October 18, 2018 Seeing as you focus on the more bottom heavy aspects, I will pay attention to this story. I hope you make them huge!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shammyboy Posted October 18, 2018 Share Posted October 18, 2018 Worth a watch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Batman76 Posted October 19, 2018 Share Posted October 19, 2018 Loved that, it was great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest incredibad Posted October 19, 2018 Share Posted October 19, 2018 Really nice work! You managed to avoid most of the traps that befall people who attempt to write this kind of fiction - and on your first try! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mickylane Posted October 19, 2018 Author Share Posted October 19, 2018 Thanks for the responses guys! I'm proofreading the next chapter now, should be up this weekend. jwhales 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mickylane Posted October 23, 2018 Author Share Posted October 23, 2018 Chapter/Part 2 is up, let me know what you guys think! Thanks for reading. https://www.deviantart.com/mickylane/art/Pots-and-Pans-Part-2-769456814 ollieg_94, xandercroft, dania201 and 1 other 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Batman76 Posted October 23, 2018 Share Posted October 23, 2018 This story is soooo good. I'm eagerly awaiting the next part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Chubs Posted October 23, 2018 Share Posted October 23, 2018 Well done, friend! Wonderfully written so far. Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter. And please give us more with Faye and Caitlyn. Caitlyn especially. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mickylane Posted October 23, 2018 Author Share Posted October 23, 2018 Thanks for the responses! Trying to get the next chapter to you guys in the next few days. hiddenman 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
richman92 Posted October 23, 2018 Share Posted October 23, 2018 Very impressive for the first story. Hope this series is not your last. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hiddenman Posted October 24, 2018 Share Posted October 24, 2018 Awesome story so far! Cant wait for the next chapter!!👍👍👍 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BilledMeUp Posted October 25, 2018 Share Posted October 25, 2018 Great stuff. I am hoping more will be coming. It’s amazing that it is so similar to a story I have written in my head a hundred times but never put fingers to keyboard. In my story, the girl comes home at Christmas with the freshman 15. Her super fit Mom tells her she should really take care of herself and not let the pounds creep on. When she gets back to school she enrolls in a fitness class and studies nutrition and gets very fit losing most of the 15 pounds but replacing some with toned muscle. She comes home for summer vacation proud to show off her new fit body. Instead, she is shocked to see her once fit mother coming down the hallway at least 50 pounds heavier. In fact, her sister, Dad, best friend, and boyfriend have all gotten fat. She discovers that her family has hired an old German grandmother-type as a cook and maid to help around the house. She has turned the whole family onto heavy German food and beer. She cooks huge breakfasts and makes pastries, etc. Of course, our hero is appalled and vows that she is going to continue with her fitness regime and not turn into a fat cow like the rest of them. But...over the summer she and her friend end up sitting around the pool stuffing themselves and washing it all down with beer from the kegerator that has been installed by the barbecue near the pool. xandercroft, hundzabrutus and mickylane 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Chubs Posted October 25, 2018 Share Posted October 25, 2018 16 hours ago, BilledMeUp said: Great stuff. I am hoping more will be coming. It’s amazing that it is so similar to a story I have written in my head a hundred times but never put fingers to keyboard. In my story, the girl comes home at Christmas with the freshman 15. Her super fit Mom tells her she should really take care of herself and not let the pounds creep on. When she gets back to school she enrolls in a fitness class and studies nutrition and gets very fit losing most of the 15 pounds but replacing some with toned muscle. She comes home for summer vacation proud to show off her new fit body. Instead, she is shocked to see her once fit mother coming down the hallway at least 50 pounds heavier. In fact, her sister, Dad, best friend, and boyfriend have all gotten fat. She discovers that her family has hired an old German grandmother-type as a cook and maid to help around the house. She has turned the whole family onto heavy German food and beer. She cooks huge breakfasts and makes pastries, etc. Of course, our hero is appalled and vows that she is going to continue with her fitness regime and not turn into a fat cow like the rest of them. But...over the summer she and her friend end up sitting around the pool stuffing themselves and washing it all down with beer from the kegerator that has been installed by the barbecue near the pool. I think this does sound similar but I would still very much enjoy reading it if you ever do put pen to paper. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mickylane Posted October 25, 2018 Author Share Posted October 25, 2018 Wrapping up the next chapter soon. Everyone's support has been great, and all the ideas flowing is awesome to see! Although without revealing too much this story is going to try to stay totally unpredictable, while still maintaining the basics. New chapter tomorrow! butterboy, Lt. Chubs and ulvrik 2 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mickylane Posted October 26, 2018 Author Share Posted October 26, 2018 Sooner the better right? Part 3, things are starting to heat up. Hope everyone enjoys! https://www.deviantart.com/mickylane/art/Pots-and-Pans-Part-3-769863562 xandercroft, ollieg_94, butterboy and 1 other 2 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BilledMeUp Posted October 26, 2018 Share Posted October 26, 2018 Thanks, enjoyed Ch 3. I'll have to poke around my computer, I think I started my story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coop Posted October 26, 2018 Share Posted October 26, 2018 Keep this train rolling! Can't wait to see how big they all get. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid a Posted October 26, 2018 Share Posted October 26, 2018 this is incredible - great work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Batman76 Posted October 26, 2018 Share Posted October 26, 2018 Fantastic stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big chief Posted October 27, 2018 Share Posted October 27, 2018 This is great work. Can't wait for the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mickylane Posted October 29, 2018 Author Share Posted October 29, 2018 Thank you guys! Took the weekend off from writing but back at it for chapter 4. Hopefully out on Wednesday! hiddenman, Big chief and jwhales 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mickylane Posted November 2, 2018 Author Share Posted November 2, 2018 Sorry for the radio silence! A little late but Chapter 4 is here, https://www.deviantart.com/mickylane/art/Pots-and-Pans-Part-4-770863644 Thanks again to everyone who is reading. I don't really respond enough to individual comments, but know that they are all appreciated! hundzabrutus, ollieg_94, kachenjunga and 2 others 3 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xandercroft Posted November 2, 2018 Share Posted November 2, 2018 Best story of this year? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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