Dr. Feeder Posted July 27, 2018 Share Posted July 27, 2018 "The Personal Assistant" letsgetfatter, kirsch, John Smith and 8 others 7 2 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt L. Posted July 27, 2018 Share Posted July 27, 2018 Well done! Dr. Feeder and G35dizzle 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Smith Posted July 28, 2018 Share Posted July 28, 2018 They more but likely outpassed the limits of their clause. Dr. Feeder 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest FrankToo Posted July 28, 2018 Share Posted July 28, 2018 Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Feeder Posted July 29, 2018 Author Share Posted July 29, 2018 Those rendered models look a little stiff but I think you get used to it, idk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Feeder Posted August 2, 2018 Author Share Posted August 2, 2018 Working on a new one... slaptastic69, >_< 0_0, Blackbeen and 4 others 6 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Feeder Posted August 2, 2018 Author Share Posted August 2, 2018 The new one will be longer and chattier. Bad idea? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Murp Posted August 8, 2018 Share Posted August 8, 2018 Nice to see something posted here that had the entire arc and wasn't abandoned halfway through. I always like when one girl tries to gain weight and it rubs off on the second. Dr. Feeder 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yapo Posted August 17, 2018 Share Posted August 17, 2018 On 7/27/2018 at 9:13 AM, Dr. Feeder said: "The Personal Assistant" Tell us please secrets of your art! What soft did you use for rendering and where did you get such nice models? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Feeder Posted August 17, 2018 Author Share Posted August 17, 2018 37 minutes ago, Yapo said: Tell us please secrets of your art! What soft did you use for rendering and where did you get such nice models? Daz3D Studio is the software and and the Daz3d website provided the models and most of the props. Yapo 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1mn01 Posted August 17, 2018 Share Posted August 17, 2018 I like this type of story. Nice job. Dr. Feeder 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Feeder Posted September 5, 2018 Author Share Posted September 5, 2018 15 hours ago, Blackbeen said: Progress? Stuck on page 27, but here's another little bit. FA_Heaven, jwhales, Blackbeen and 1 other 3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Feeder Posted May 13, 2019 Author Share Posted May 13, 2019 On 9/4/2018 at 7:28 AM, Blackbeen said: Progress? Computer went down and I lost all my work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Feeder Posted May 13, 2019 Author Share Posted May 13, 2019 I'm considering doing another story like this one but would like more feedback. Anyone? John Smith and slaptastic69 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Feeder Posted May 13, 2019 Author Share Posted May 13, 2019 3 hours ago, Dr. Feeder said: I'm considering doing another story like this one but would like more feedback. Anyone? "Likes" are appreciated but I need actual comments or criticisms! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1mn01 Posted May 13, 2019 Share Posted May 13, 2019 2 hours ago, Dr. Feeder said: I'm considering doing another story like this one but would like more feedback. Anyone? Hey dr., im a huge fan. Been on your site many times. Man I’m sorry about your computer. I’d use a google drive to store your stuff or like an external hard drive. Hell even a flash drive can work. Make sure you got enough space on it though. I like the original. It’s good. I like the story. Here’s a few ideas o was throwing around and even started writing a story on this basic idea. One of my favorite types of stories is like a skinny girl stays with a fatter family member like an aunt or grandmother or sister or mom and then picks up their habits or enjoys their cooking. Now they can be gain without noticing, or the family member could be fattening them as punishment or revenge like in Fanedfox “punished to fatten”. Idk. I’ve always found that a interesting concept. Hope you can salvage something off the drive on your computer if you havent tried already. Dr. Feeder 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Feeder Posted May 13, 2019 Author Share Posted May 13, 2019 4 minutes ago, 1mn01 said: Hey dr., im a huge fan. Been on your site many times. Man I’m sorry about your computer. I’d use a google drive to store your stuff or like an external hard drive. Hell even a flash drive can work. Make sure you got enough space on it though. I like the original. It’s good. I like the story. Here’s a few ideas o was throwing around and even started writing a story on this basic idea. One of my favorite types of stories is like a skinny girl stays with a fatter family member like an aunt or grandmother or sister or mom and then picks up their habits or enjoys their cooking. Now they can be gain without noticing, or the family member could be fattening them as punishment or revenge like in Fanedfox “punished to fatten”. Idk. I’ve always found that a interesting concept. Hope you can salvage something off the drive on your computer if you havent tried already. Of course I should've done better backups, no question there and I'll try to be more conscientious about that in the future! Story lines are not a problem except that I have to make them up on the fly to maintain interest so even if I started with a revenge story it might go off the rails. Do you have any technical comments? E.g. I experimented with different lighting in different panels...were any of them particularly good or bad? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1mn01 Posted May 13, 2019 Share Posted May 13, 2019 3 minutes ago, Dr. Feeder said: Of course I should've done better backups, no question there and I'll try to be more conscientious about that in the future! Story lines are not a problem except that I have to make them up on the fly to maintain interest so even if I started with a revenge story it might go off the rails. Do you have any technical comments? E.g. I experimented with different lighting in different panels...were any of them particularly good or bad? Yeah man. I mean I don’t see any problems with the original on a graphical standpoint. I mean I did like the preview of personal assistant 2’s lighting. The low light was well done. There were a few panels where the characters facial expressions were a but blank especially looking at the dialogue attached. But other than that it’s a good ass comic man. I liked the end. I’m sure whatever you do next will be great. Dr. Feeder 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>_< 0_0 Posted May 14, 2019 Share Posted May 14, 2019 I am also a huge fan! I never got the hang of computer animations myself, but I got a big weakness for shading and light sources. They add a sense of depth and set the mood real well. I remember an old animated comic you did years ago in which a woman is opening the fridge at night and all the light from it was glowing against her skin 😚 It was most excellent. Doing that a lot will make me really pleased 😀 John Smith 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Feeder Posted May 14, 2019 Author Share Posted May 14, 2019 19 hours ago, >_< 0_0 said: I remember an old animated comic you did years ago in which a woman is opening the fridge at night and all the light from it was glowing against her skin 😚 It was most excellent. Doing that a lot will make me really pleased 😀 That's very gratifying. I was pretty proud of that scene. Unfortunately the software back then was glitchy and kept blowing up and I could never finish that story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Murp Posted May 16, 2019 Share Posted May 16, 2019 Was hoping to see a continuation of the upcoming work. Sorry to hear about the loss of the files. I like to see the kind of story where the feeder starts to fatten up at a pace behind the feedee (Female only, I can't stand male WG), and there is an added contrast between their body types (apple, pear, hourglass, etc) maybe even another feeder comes on seen as the original feeder gets too fat. In the previous story they both had the same shape, which is fine but it doesn't add as much to the anticipation of their respective gains. As far as lighting and shading, the second to the last picture in the comic you posted looks gorgeous. Her expression and features look great. The other frames look a bit muted and flat by comparison, so whatever you did different there, do that for everything I guess. Dr. Feeder 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FA_Heaven Posted June 19, 2019 Share Posted June 19, 2019 On 5/14/2019 at 12:43 AM, Dr. Feeder said: Of course I should've done better backups, no question there and I'll try to be more conscientious about that in the future! Story lines are not a problem except that I have to make them up on the fly to maintain interest so even if I started with a revenge story it might go off the rails. Do you have any technical comments? E.g. I experimented with different lighting in different panels...were any of them particularly good or bad? So if storylines are not a problem, could you post a story without illustrations, please? And add illustrations later? Your wg stories are all time classics, they are divine even without illustrations. Please write more. I would be glad to read some new masterpiece of yours. Dr. Feeder and >_< 0_0 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Feeder Posted June 21, 2019 Author Share Posted June 21, 2019 On 6/19/2019 at 2:48 AM, hexxus said: Your wg stories are all time classics, they are divine even without illustrations. Thanks! What's your favorite? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FA_Heaven Posted June 22, 2019 Share Posted June 22, 2019 7 hours ago, Dr. Feeder said: Thanks! What's your favorite? It`s hard to choose, I like almost all your stories 💪 (for exception of Schlaraffenland maybe, I am more into realistic wg). I want to tell what makes your stories so great in my opinion in general. Some authors focus on gain only, and even if descriptions are good (which is rare) they treat their protagonist like piece of meat. Others, on the contrary, drowning in the tons of unnesessary dialogue and plenty of story sidelines. As a result it becomes more like ordinary prose (very boring in most cases) than an actual wg story. But you always got the exactly right balance between descriptions and characters development. Your protagonist is not just piece of meat, not a dumb doll even, but a classy young woman. I love characters too. You know, not the total bitch, but a slightly bitchy attitude with a bit of taming of the shrew thing. Not only your descriptions of figure are good, your descriptions of appetite are vivid as well. For example idea of Chocolate Palace in The restaraunt was brilliant, when you stick to the very same dish in comparisons it gives a full sensation of how capacity improving. Love your dialogue too. "Yeah, but look," I said, deciding to show him the surprise after all. I gave him a picture of myself in the bikini that had been taken at the party. "That was a month ago." I gave him another photo, of me in the same bikini. "That was yesterday. Can you see the difference?"He couldn't help himself. He looked."Well, yes, of course," he said. "You've gained, what about ten pounds?""Ten pounds exactly. What do you think?" I said. *************** "Sam? I've put on another five pounds since the other day--can you tell?""Hmmm," I said, pretending I hadn't already looked,"yes, I can.""Am I plump yet?""Probably. Can you suck in your belly? That's the test. If you can suck your belly in all the way, when you're standing up, you're not plump yet.""Well, I'm sure I can't suck it in now," she chuckled, feeling it experimentally,"since I just had that big lunch an hour ago. And three truffles just now. But I'll have to try that tomorrow morning. I bet I can't." Some great examples, very seductive. I wish your stories were longer though. In the Bet, for example, The twins ate better than ever, and were happy as clams. The month was over. or It was a little over a year later. Ashley waddled up to the scale look like gaps and missed opportinities to describe a thorough feeding. And The Restoraunt, Spoiled and The Sculptor are screaming for sequels, since the protagonists put on not so much amount weight at the end. A very few authors can compete you in quality, you kinda remind me Salinger, who retired after publishing his masterpieces and stayed reclusive for decades. So if you resume writing I'd be overjoyed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Feeder Posted June 22, 2019 Author Share Posted June 22, 2019 Thanks so much. I've gotten very little feedback on my writing and never anything that extensive. I have written more stories over the years but nothing I thought worth posting. Maybe my standards have risen more than my abilities, idk. But you never know. More stories may happen. Stay tuned! slaptastic69 and FA_Heaven 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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