CyrilFiggus2 Posted March 13, 2019 Share Posted March 13, 2019 I know that story! Such a fun read, though I wish more attention would go to the other characters/options in the story. This is a fun turn of events--can't wait to see what else you come up with! Batman76 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyrilFiggus2 Posted March 13, 2019 Share Posted March 13, 2019 These are great! I love the interactions you come up with for the heroines, from Cassie feeding Kara to Karen and Diana checking each other out--and that little bit at the end of the last chapter was delightful. Good stuff! Batman76 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyrilFiggus2 Posted March 13, 2019 Share Posted March 13, 2019 10 minutes ago, Batman76 said: Thanks! I wanted to have the little variances to make them different, making them start at different weights, gain in different ways and act differently. Raven the grouch, Babs frustrated over declining mobility, Starfire enjoying her soft curves, Cassandra feeding the increasingly meek Supergirl while ignoring her own gut, Diana getting freaked out at losing her figure as she goes down the same path and Karen cackling as it happens. All of which make for excellent reading material! Karen might want to be careful though--if even Wonder Woman can't stop eating herself into obesity, no one is safe... Batman76 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyrilFiggus2 Posted March 14, 2019 Share Posted March 14, 2019 1 hour ago, Batman76 said: She just might.... As I said further back on the page, PG is my favorite super heroine. This time around she gets a more...dominant role though, compared to the humiliation of before. Which is a lovely turn of events, I must say. Seeing Diana bashful and submissive to PG is wonderful, no pun intended. Batman76 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyrilFiggus2 Posted March 14, 2019 Share Posted March 14, 2019 Missed the update earlier! The play on Wonka's candy forest was fantastic, and the play between Diana and Karen is excellent. I'm really looking forward to seeing how this adventure goes for the both of them. Batman76 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyrilFiggus2 Posted March 15, 2019 Share Posted March 15, 2019 Another wonderful chapter! I love the idea that Karen wants to get fatter, but since she can't, she'll enjoy it by proxy with the others. One slight continuity error though--you mentioned earlier that Diana didn't have her lasso on her, yet she has it in this chapter. Just thought you might want to know! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyrilFiggus2 Posted March 15, 2019 Share Posted March 15, 2019 2 minutes ago, Batman76 said: Ah thanks, well unfortunately editing it out from the old chapter isn't doable, so the retcon will be she has it. Fair enough! Guess it's not Chekhov's lasso then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyrilFiggus2 Posted March 18, 2019 Share Posted March 18, 2019 I've said it before, but I love the interactions between Diana and Karen. The back and forth in the domination game is really fun, and the talk at the beginning of the chapter was really sweet. Can't wait to see where they go from here! Also, poor Kara. Girl's a nervous wreck, and that's probably not going to change any time soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyrilFiggus2 Posted March 25, 2019 Share Posted March 25, 2019 Man, either that car has short seat belts or Karen's belly is a lot bigger than I imagined. Love the scene at the beginning, especially with Diana praying to Hera--hopefully she won't regret that in the days to come. Batman76 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyrilFiggus2 Posted March 25, 2019 Share Posted March 25, 2019 3 hours ago, Batman76 said: No idea in the realism of the scene, but I wanted to see it. It's a superhero story--realism automatically goes right out the window. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyrilFiggus2 Posted April 10, 2019 Share Posted April 10, 2019 God, I'm amazed Diana managed to hold out for as long as she did. After some time under Karen's roof though, she won't be able to lift so much as a bicycle, I bet. Batman76 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyrilFiggus2 Posted April 12, 2019 Share Posted April 12, 2019 If Karen is this thirsty right now, when most of the team is (probably) still in the mid/high-100s, I can only imagine what she's like once the team is approaching the big 3-0-0. xandercroft and Batman76 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyrilFiggus2 Posted April 13, 2019 Share Posted April 13, 2019 Love your depiction of Raven, especially how she's still a fan of ponies. And boy howdy, Karen is hornier than a toad, isn't she? Batman76 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyrilFiggus2 Posted April 14, 2019 Share Posted April 14, 2019 D'aw...I love how even though Karen is still aiming to fatten Kara up, she's still watching out for her in other aspects. Nice planning on Karen's part too--hopefully Cassie is able to pull it off without a hitch! Batman76 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyrilFiggus2 Posted April 14, 2019 Share Posted April 14, 2019 Poor Barbara. Being mortal is hard enough, but being an incredibly obese one at that? Woof. xandercroft and Batman76 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyrilFiggus2 Posted April 16, 2019 Share Posted April 16, 2019 God, I love your descriptions for the heroines and their gains. The image of a puffy/bloated Diana struggling at the butterfly press is wonderful, and I'll be curious to see who takes charge this time. Batman76 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyrilFiggus2 Posted April 16, 2019 Share Posted April 16, 2019 Quite the dilemma Karen's in. If it were up to me, I would say feed Diana--there's always a chance that she can find some other means to fatten herself when all is said and done, plus we get more of the steamy scenes from the first few installments. Batman76 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyrilFiggus2 Posted April 17, 2019 Share Posted April 17, 2019 Oh my god, Wonder Woman with a stutter. I think Diana's going to regret offering to take Karen's place in gaining; she's going to be lucky if she can move at all by the time this is over. Batman76 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyrilFiggus2 Posted April 18, 2019 Share Posted April 18, 2019 Good lord, Lana Lang's mother is absolutely ruthless. Love how you've given Smallville a bit more character, and I especially love Mean Karen. Batman76 and >_< 0_0 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyrilFiggus2 Posted April 19, 2019 Share Posted April 19, 2019 God, I love this back and forth between Diana and Karen. Every time Power Girl thinks she has Wonder Woman right where she wants her, the Amazon finds a new way to exploit the Kryptonian's lust. And this is just the beginning of their time together! Batman76 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyrilFiggus2 Posted May 2, 2019 Share Posted May 2, 2019 Mmm...if Batgirl's gain is anything to go off of, I can only imagine what the others must be like by now. And as fun as it would be to see Anonymous nip this problem in the bud, I think it's high time the heroines did something about this--assuming they can get off the couch, of course. Batman76 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyrilFiggus2 Posted May 3, 2019 Share Posted May 3, 2019 To borrow a phrase from the late Dusty Rhodes, the whupping Harley's going to get is gonna be shameful. I reckon it'll be like the panicking woman scene in Airplane--everyone lining up to slap her upside the face. Batman76 and swahilimonkfish 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyrilFiggus2 Posted June 3, 2019 Share Posted June 3, 2019 Lovely new chapter! Dream sequences are always great for a look at what a character is feeling, and this is no exception. Love how it takes Diana a good moment or two before she realizes just what's happened to her, and I'm curious to see what's going on with Karen. Batman76 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyrilFiggus2 Posted June 8, 2019 Share Posted June 8, 2019 I see Cassie's making up for how trim she's gotten in the main story. This was really cute, and I liked how you bounced back and forth between the girls, as well as the wordplay between them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyrilFiggus2 Posted June 12, 2019 Share Posted June 12, 2019 Looks like the Titans are shaping up nicely! Starfire is playing the role of overfed matron quite well, and I love how Raven is getting so fat that even her demonic powers are having trouble handling her bulk. Batman76 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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