Guest Fatlover23q Posted March 15, 2016 Share Posted March 15, 2016 Are there any weight gain stories that involve like the wife/girlfriend gaining weight but the husband isn't happy with it at first? Idk if anyone else shares in my interest but I always thought it would be an interesting read for the husband to be turned off by the weight but the girl continues to throw herself at him until he enjoys it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tiki67 Posted March 15, 2016 Share Posted March 15, 2016 I don't know if it's exactly what you want, but a few years back I wrote a story about a guy whose wife got fat. It's not great, but you can read it here, if you wanna:http://tiki67.deviantart.com/art/Fiona-466237524 Also, I am interested in the kind of story you describe. I hope someone knows some. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Observer10 Posted March 16, 2016 Share Posted March 16, 2016 On 3/15/2016 at 9:35 AM, Tiki67 said: a few years back I wrote a story about a guy whose wife got fat. It's not great, but you can read it here, if you wanna:http://tiki67.deviantart.com/art/Fiona-466237524 . Actually not a bad tale as far as it went - although the extent of Fiona's denial and the resolution of Orlando's conflicted feelings (why did he initially embrace her gain, not react to her loss and regain and how could she be so oblivious? )into a side relationship didn't seem realistic. The big problem, however is that you pledged to complete it but never did. . Why not rework the plot a bit to give Fiona and Orlando a better multi-dimensional relationship, then bring it to a happy ending? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tiki67 Posted March 27, 2016 Share Posted March 27, 2016 On 3/15/2016 at 11:18 PM, Observer10 said: Actually not a bad tale as far as it went - although the extent of Fiona's denial and the resolution of Orlando's conflicted feelings (why did he initially embrace her gain, not react to her loss and regain and how could she be so oblivious? )into a side relationship didn't seem realistic. The big problem, however is that you pledged to complete it but never did. . Why not rework the plot a bit to give Fiona and Orlando a better multi-dimensional relationship, then bring it to a happy ending? Yeah I guess you're right. Not that I put too much energy into the plot in the first place, I just wanted to write about gaining women, haha. But thanks for the critique Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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