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The Belle of the Drive-In


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Okay, so there's a lot of my story in this one, particularly in the beginning.  While names and places and events have been picked up and shaken around and fictionalized, I think if certain 'characters' irl read it they could figure it out.

This is actually what I wanted to steer Sam and Sarah towards, but the more I wrote about Sam and Sarah the more they became their own characters with their own story and so to retell the events of Shelli and Jake, I had to construct a new tale.

This contains mutual gain, but in the beginning it's just the girls.

As always, on the deviant page.

http://jakemcduck.deviantart.com/

Hope you like it.

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I think this is one of Jakemcduck's best stories thus far. I'm just glad to see any writing from one of the best authors of this genre. Please continue this one, McDuck.

Thank you!  I appreciate that very much!  It will continue.  I'll have another up soon.

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I should hope so! While everyone else is singing your praises, I should add that I've read everything you've written (posted to DA, that is) and I enjoy your work immensely. Carry on!

Thank you!  I will carry on.  Look for a couple to be added this weekend.  Maybe 3 updates. 

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Okay, so 4 is up.

This episode is basically a bridge to get to the next part.  Since the last part wouldn't all fit how I had it originally, I needed a new part to make sure all the important information was established before the next part (already written) could start.  Otherwise I'd have to change that too and there isn't any room for change.

So in this part we find Shelli at work late at Shaggy's when a friend stops by while she's in a compromising position, and then our couple heads south to see family for Easter.  This part takes place in the first half of 1994.

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Awesome. I was just thinking about this story the other day. That last little bit was incredibly hot.

Thanks!  Glad you enjoyed it.  I've been editing it for a while.  Finally got to the point that i could live with posting it (and short enough that it would fit in one post on deviant).

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Part 6 is up on my deviant page.  It's only been six months since the last part, how's that for service?

In this exciting episode, Shelli's weight seems to be getting out of control and her sisters are giving her the cold shoulder, but what do Jake and Dawn do about it?  Give her hand of course.

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Part 8 is up.

 

Jake and Shelli feel like they're spinning their wheels in all areas of their life.  Their hectic life is leading to issues with weight, but whose weight?  Maybe a surprise for the family, more money and marriage counseling is the answer. 

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As always, an update in a timely fashion.  part 9 is up on my deviant art page.  Enjoy.

 

Jake and Shelli have renewed their commitment to each other and put their plans into action.  But have their efforts done more than just add to their waistlines?  After dragging their friends and business partners to faraway Findlay, if for no other reason than just to irritate them, Jake and Shelli slip away to one of their secret getaways for a little action.

http://jakemcduck.deviantart.com/

 

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Sorry for such a long break between updates.  But I hope you enjoy this latest installment of Belle of the Drive-In.  

This one picks up where the last one left off.  As Shelli's reunion winds down, she's in the mood for emotional eating and they opt for a bungalow behind a dive bar.  And as they year winds down and Shaggy's is closed, Shelli's sister Chrissy is finding it harder than ever to keep the weight off, especially since they've been spending so much time together.  Throw in a visit from Dawn and things start to heat up.

On my deviantArt page.

https://jakemcduck.deviantart.com/ 

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hey people, the next part of belle of the drive in has been updated on my deviantArt page.  

In this exciting episode, Jake and Shelli head to St Louis for a business conference that doesn't go at all how they planned.  Meanwhile, back at home, Shelli's sister Chrissy has been losing her struggle with food.

this is part 13 on friday the 13th.  what a coincidence.  or is it?

yes it is.  just a coincidence.

you'll find it here.  i hope you enjoy it.

https://www.deviantart.com/jakemcduck

 

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For those of you who follow my Belle of the Drive-In saga, there's been a long awaited update on my deviantArt page.  

What happened after Shelli's sister got caught gorging herself in the park?  Shelli tells her sister about her trip to the doctor and Jake's weight is on the rise after his annual physical.  That doesn't make his business partners happy and one of his advisers confronts him.  Lastly, as summer wanes, it's Jake's birthday and he and Shelli have some much needed alone time.

https://www.deviantart.com/jakemcduck 

This is episode 14.  I hope you enjoy it.

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Hey people, it's that time again.  There has been an update to Belle of the Drive In.  This is episode 15.

In this episode, we get a glimpse into a day in the life of Dawn.  She's about to marry Stan, finally, and the realization hits her that she never managed to lose any weight no matter how hard she tried.  she lets loose one last time vowing to change her ways after the wedding.  After the wedding, Jake and Shelli sneak home for some quality alone time without a houseful of kids.  As much as Jake is enjoying their fat lifestyles there is a contest that occupies his thoughts, he already knows she won't like the idea but will the prize help sway her?

This is a tale of long term realistic gain, and the semi-realistic life that goes with it.

https://www.deviantart.com/jakemcduck/art/Belle-of-the-Drive-In-Part-XV-877755487 

https://www.deviantart.com/jakemcduck 

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There has been an update to my deviantArt page.  This update to Belle of the Drive In is my 100th deviation starting in 2012.  In this exciting episode, Jake is willing to admit the contest was a bust if not a complete sham.  What does the phantom contest mean for their future with MLM-USA?  And with their diet over it seems their appetites may have rubbed off on Chrissy and Danny.  Meanwhile, Shelli turns 30 and it’s time to celebrate.  But who’s enjoying her birthday more?  As always this is a long tale of realistic mutual gain.  Read about it here https://www.deviantart.com/jakemcduck/art/Belle-of-the-Drive-In-Part-XVI-896903848 and read the rest of my stories here.  https://www.deviantart.com/jakemcduck

This is Belle of the Drive In Part XVI.  I hope you enjoy it.

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