jakemcduck Posted June 28, 2014 Share Posted June 28, 2014 Okay, so there's a lot of my story in this one, particularly in the beginning. While names and places and events have been picked up and shaken around and fictionalized, I think if certain 'characters' irl read it they could figure it out. This is actually what I wanted to steer Sam and Sarah towards, but the more I wrote about Sam and Sarah the more they became their own characters with their own story and so to retell the events of Shelli and Jake, I had to construct a new tale. This contains mutual gain, but in the beginning it's just the girls. As always, on the deviant page. http://jakemcduck.deviantart.com/ Hope you like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goblin Posted July 5, 2014 Share Posted July 5, 2014 this story is just about boobs and hips Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarathal Posted July 6, 2014 Share Posted July 6, 2014 this story is just about boobs and hips Is that a major problem for you or a friendly summary for potential readers? It's hard to interpret. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest denbu Posted July 6, 2014 Share Posted July 6, 2014 I think this is one of Jakemcduck's best stories thus far. I'm just glad to see any writing from one of the best authors of this genre. Please continue this one, McDuck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest jaromir Posted July 6, 2014 Share Posted July 6, 2014 You truly are a man of BBW letters. I love all your work Jake. My deviantart account was basically created to read your stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakemcduck Posted July 8, 2014 Author Share Posted July 8, 2014 this story is just about boobs and hips What else is there? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakemcduck Posted July 8, 2014 Author Share Posted July 8, 2014 I think this is one of Jakemcduck's best stories thus far. I'm just glad to see any writing from one of the best authors of this genre. Please continue this one, McDuck. Thank you! I appreciate that very much! It will continue. I'll have another up soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakemcduck Posted July 8, 2014 Author Share Posted July 8, 2014 You truly are a man of BBW letters. I love all your work Jake. My deviantart account was basically created to read your stuff. Thanks! Very flattered. I really appreciate that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakemcduck Posted July 8, 2014 Author Share Posted July 8, 2014 Is that a major problem for you or a friendly summary for potential readers? It's hard to interpret. I'm sure he meant it as a good thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarathal Posted July 9, 2014 Share Posted July 9, 2014 I'm sure he meant it as a good thing. I should hope so! While everyone else is singing your praises, I should add that I've read everything you've written (posted to DA, that is) and I enjoy your work immensely. Carry on! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakemcduck Posted July 10, 2014 Author Share Posted July 10, 2014 I should hope so! While everyone else is singing your praises, I should add that I've read everything you've written (posted to DA, that is) and I enjoy your work immensely. Carry on! Thank you! I will carry on. Look for a couple to be added this weekend. Maybe 3 updates. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakemcduck Posted July 15, 2014 Author Share Posted July 15, 2014 part 2 is up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jalamuc Posted August 4, 2014 Share Posted August 4, 2014 When can we see part 3 coming? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakemcduck Posted August 5, 2014 Author Share Posted August 5, 2014 I'm still on my hiatus, but part 3 is done. I'll have it uploaded soon. Thanks for reading! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakemcduck Posted September 6, 2014 Author Share Posted September 6, 2014 Part 3 is up. I don't know what the deal was with deviant art but I had to keep editing it down to make it fit. I think I edited out a whole page to make this episode fit. But it's up. Enjoy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakemcduck Posted November 27, 2014 Author Share Posted November 27, 2014 Okay, so 4 is up. This episode is basically a bridge to get to the next part. Since the last part wouldn't all fit how I had it originally, I needed a new part to make sure all the important information was established before the next part (already written) could start. Otherwise I'd have to change that too and there isn't any room for change. So in this part we find Shelli at work late at Shaggy's when a friend stops by while she's in a compromising position, and then our couple heads south to see family for Easter. This part takes place in the first half of 1994. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakemcduck Posted March 17, 2015 Author Share Posted March 17, 2015 5 is up. What follows fooling around in the back seat? In this episode, Jake is lamenting his crappy job and Shelli is lamenting a diet she got roped in to. Whatever will they do? I marked this as mature. I'm not sure if it needs it or not. the link. http://jakemcduck.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest temporary Posted March 17, 2015 Share Posted March 17, 2015 Awesome. I was just thinking about this story the other day. That last little bit was incredibly hot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakemcduck Posted March 18, 2015 Author Share Posted March 18, 2015 Awesome. I was just thinking about this story the other day. That last little bit was incredibly hot. Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. I've been editing it for a while. Finally got to the point that i could live with posting it (and short enough that it would fit in one post on deviant). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakemcduck Posted August 18, 2015 Author Share Posted August 18, 2015 Part 6 is up on my deviant page. It's only been six months since the last part, how's that for service? In this exciting episode, Shelli's weight seems to be getting out of control and her sisters are giving her the cold shoulder, but what do Jake and Dawn do about it? Give her hand of course. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakemcduck Posted February 2, 2016 Author Share Posted February 2, 2016 Part 7 is up on my deviantart page. It's a new year and Jake and Shelli are enjoying a huge bash with their business partners, but how can they think about business when all they have in mind is each other's growing body. bon appetito Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terry23 Posted February 4, 2016 Share Posted February 4, 2016 Great stuff McDuck! Thanks for the new chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakemcduck Posted February 5, 2016 Author Share Posted February 5, 2016 7 hours ago, tipster22 said: Great stuff McDuck! Thanks for the new chapter! Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakemcduck Posted May 16, 2016 Author Share Posted May 16, 2016 Part 8 is up. Jake and Shelli feel like they're spinning their wheels in all areas of their life. Their hectic life is leading to issues with weight, but whose weight? Maybe a surprise for the family, more money and marriage counseling is the answer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakemcduck Posted August 29, 2016 Author Share Posted August 29, 2016 As always, an update in a timely fashion. part 9 is up on my deviant art page. Enjoy. Jake and Shelli have renewed their commitment to each other and put their plans into action. But have their efforts done more than just add to their waistlines? After dragging their friends and business partners to faraway Findlay, if for no other reason than just to irritate them, Jake and Shelli slip away to one of their secret getaways for a little action. http://jakemcduck.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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