awesss Posted July 27, 2012 Share Posted July 27, 2012 http://jerkajerk.deviantart.com/ I tend to not have time to write in anything other than short bursts, unfortunately, but any critique would be greatly appreciated. Slight weight gain and stuffing are my main topics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest newfoundfat Posted July 28, 2012 Share Posted July 28, 2012 this is EXCELLENT! seriously i love the pacing ("short bursts") and im totally waiting for more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Rock Posted July 28, 2012 Share Posted July 28, 2012 Good stuff--very well written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesss Posted July 29, 2012 Author Share Posted July 29, 2012 Geeze, guys, I'm very flattered by the responses! Thank you! Chapter 6 should be up tonight! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesss Posted July 30, 2012 Author Share Posted July 30, 2012 Annnnd it's up! A bit dirtier than the other five chapters and chapter seven will probably follow suite. http://jerkajerk.deviantart.com/#/d5979yo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest temporary Posted July 30, 2012 Share Posted July 30, 2012 niiiiiiice... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesss Posted July 30, 2012 Author Share Posted July 30, 2012 Hey, thanks temporary! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesss Posted August 2, 2012 Author Share Posted August 2, 2012 http://jerkajerk.deviantart.com/art/Chelsea-Part-7-318477229 New chapter up and let me tell you right now; it's very NSFW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jalamuc Posted August 5, 2012 Share Posted August 5, 2012 chapter 8 up now to ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesss Posted August 7, 2012 Author Share Posted August 7, 2012 http://jerkajerk.deviantart.com/art/Chelsea-Part-9-319599985 Yet another update! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesss Posted August 13, 2012 Author Share Posted August 13, 2012 Both parts 10 & 11 are up, because I was too lazy to remember to update you guys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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